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One Hundred Seven B/W Summer (Two Fer!)
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Baby, it's HOT out dere. :)


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"One Hundred Seven"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So H  O  T,
it hurts to inhale,
lungs
heaving against heat
that builds
and will not relent;
so H  O  T,
you shrivel inside
as
you become one with
the sweat
pudd'ling at your feet;
so H  O  T,
all you can do is
watch
temperatures climb
as well
as electric bills;
so H  O  T,
even ninety  sounds
good ...
one hundred seven
just a
bit ridiculous!!


"Summer"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
...ground, brittle; baked to
desication by
the oven once known
by another name:
the sun.
...the grass, returned to
the soil from whence it
came:  scattered ashes
tossed by mourner's palms:
dead seed.
...the air, skeletal
fragments skittering
like stones in the lungs,
devoid of moisture:
dry bones.
this, people is heat:
a shared misery
in my backyard as
well as in your own:
summer.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "One Hundred Seven B/W Summer (Two Fer!)"
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
You're making me sweat Karla...sweltering in a balmy 108 degrees yesterday...and three sets of tennis!
Love, Taylor

Reviewed on July 20, 2006
WOW, it is hot out dere, isn't it?? Hope y'all find relief from the blistering heat soon! Who ever thought we'd be wishin' for ninety degree weather?? LOL Cute write on a not so pleasant situation; keep up the great work! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
We lucked out, two days in the upper 90's with indicies (what the hell is an indicies...? Sounds kinda indecent...)...I know about the breathing stuff, I have been experiencing that too, I just thought my boobs got too big...:0

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
Know the feeling. Today is our hottest day on record..

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
Dry and arid as it gets...when the rains come we appreciate our liquid nourishment the more. I'm with you guys with this heat thing. It's so dry everything turns to scales doesn't it?

Susan

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
wow

Tx puts you thru alot
but you must love it to live there
people from that state are so proud.......

AC sounds good tho!
lol
keep cool anyway you can.....pax A

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
Hot, hot hot
Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
Damn now I feel HOT...even though I am COld as ice!!

Hope thing will cool down soon on your side.....maybe rain will come soonm!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 19, 2006
Ugh dont remind me LOL, that is why I am in mt A/C townhouse it hit a hundred and nine yesterday, and it may o the same today, I want the cooler weather LOL, this is no fun, write on and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on July 19, 2006
You so well express the beating of the summer heat in your poem, great job! Hope your AC don't give out,
Love and (frozen) hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
90 does sound good, all of a sudden. It's been over a hundred around here, too, with the heat index, Yikes! I think Global Warming might be here with a vengeance. I just hope it doesn't bring more of those far too nasty hurricanes.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
oh, Karla, these are fabulous descriptions and ones that I am living myself despite the mere 102 degrees we're expecting today! (: I don't think that I've ever told you, but one thing that I really enjoy about your poetry is how in tune with nature you are.

Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 19, 2006
Karla

Keep that air conditioning up and running...
And shower twice a day...and you will be as right as rain then...:)

Peter


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