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What A Way To Spend An Afternoon! (5/7/5 Format)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Not my best poetry, but this is what Karen and I did today! I can think of better ways of passing time ... LOL


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Severe storms again:
a regular occurance
'specially this year.
Very few times is
a "high risk" forecast issued --
two in last two weeks!
the sky bubbling black --
clouds ugliest I have seen,
rotating, hanging
l
o
w,
frequent lightning,
very high winds, tornado
warnings were issued --
twin sister and I
hiding in the shelter of
local hospital --
Code Black issued--that
means TAKE COVER on lowest
floor, interior
halls, as many walls
between the storm and you as
possible ... not a
fun way to spend an
afternoon.  the storm, now gone,
everything good here.
not so in other
parts of the Metroplex, but
where we are:  we're fine.  :)

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (4/24)

  

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 Reviews of "What A Way To Spend An Afternoon! (5/7/5 Format)"
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2007
Karla -

talk about adrenaline! I don't think I could take it, living in tornado land. (Your picture in light of your words is extra frightening.)

Kathy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
I can actually "hear" this poem....be safe sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
no wonder you call yourselves the storm spinner and tornado ... what an ordeal ...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Glad you survived to
write these weathered lines :)

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Ah Karla, another average Texas Tornado exciting day with Sis. What fun. LOL Happy you are well.
Rusty

Reviewed by HB Clayton
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Scary situation, glad to hear you're good. I guess another way to spend an afternoon is by vividly describing your recent turmoil. A deep breath and a breathtaking write-HB

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Karla, I've been watching reports in Texas and praying for you guys and everyone there. It really has been terrible,and we can only hope and pray it will soon cease. Awful way to spend the day, but at least you had the shelter to go to!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
first it's good to know that you and your sis are fine. secondly, damn good writing...loved it!

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Saw on the news where severe weather tore through there and my first thoughts were of you and Karen...glad to know that your okay, not this is not my favorite way to spend an evening either!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Not a great way to spend an afternoon for sure. Glad you are safe. Lady J

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
So glad that you and your sister are safe.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Good to know you are staying well and safe...e & r

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Karla,
So glad to know you and Karen are fine! Stay safe!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
what a relief! you see, how great it is to have a sister. cheers and luck

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
thank goodness you two are okay!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Sounds very frightening. Glad it passed and everyone is safe.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Happy to hear you are at least in a safe building. Wow am I glad we rarely ever see a tornado her in the east. Stay safe.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Glad to hear it, StormSpinner!

Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Karla~

Nooooooooo, you're so right: NOT a good way to spend the afternoon. Man, o, man! And here *YOU* are, Little Miss Storm Phobe--having to comfort...ME. LOL (You did a great job!) Captures the intensity of the afternoon and evening "fun" LOL Very well done yet again; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Ever thought of taking up chess..
Seriously the Texas storms are teriffic, I spent half my time using the car as a boat, driving through flash floods. BTW don't fly a kite and use a key during the storm...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Please, give a man a break! I lost my umbrella...and it is just what I don't need, another Code Black...duck and run!!!
Niiiiiiice?
Georg

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Thanks for sharing a bit of your life in the storms as those of us here in the den pray for your safety always! Take cover AND take care my sisters!
blessin's and (((hugs)))
cynth'ya

Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Our UK storms are nowhere near as powerful as the ones you experience, to this end I stand in awe of them. As a kid I'd be scared but as an adult I stand at the door watching the rain pounding off the streets of life and listening to the rumbling indegestion above. Awesome.

Regards
Dai


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