Tranquility (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Fab photo and poem. I shall come back to your site tomorrow and read up some more...Lorri

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

A beautiful photo and a wonderful write, we were the one's that got pounded last night with the high winds, hail, and heavy downpours, come a wash out here! Scary stuff, thought about you and Karen as I watched the storm going from bad to worse...but all's well that ends well! Only minor damage to the garden, lots of leafs and pine needles in our gutters, but nothing that can't be cleaned up or repaired. Enjoyed your write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Karla,

Excellent photo. Something definitely to treasure. Blessings, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

Storm rain is like a burst of sobbing tears which washes some of the sorrows away until the calm descend and we can think clear again.
Georg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 6, 2007

He puts his signature in everything that is of beauty...

Ty for this Karla, hope those storms ease off though.

Love n hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Great images in this piece Karla........M

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Last Saturday our yard sale turned into a disaster..
Big storm came up, we didn't have time to get stuff
back into the carport.
x0x0x0x0x
Your friend
Ron

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Excellent writing, dear lady...Hugss

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Why not 'twilight gathered her skirts'. I don't like twilight to be an 'it'. Change it now or I'll batter your quails!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Loved the imagery in this pen Karla. Exceptional

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

"as twilight gathered its skirts around the setting sky."

This is the stuff of poets dear Karla. I like the way 'severe clear' tastes on the tongue too. Well done! Blessings! Enjoy the peace ...

Richard

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

So glad you're seeing the sun again. What a wonderful "God painting" the photo is! Happy good weather!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Soon the weather will settle for you. Lady J

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Praying that the storms ease up, and most of all praying for you, may you contine to be blessed in the Lord
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Great package to complement each other!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Karla, a great photo illustrating the brightness of the light trying to peep through the dark clouds...providing a sense of tranquility...I loved this!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

ah, yes, sometimes a storm in life makes us appreciate tranquility even more-a lovely write as well as picture

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Stunning photo to match the beauty of your poem and the Creator who inspires it all.

Eileen

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Do you have anything else I could use on Angels That Care?

Storms are great. Tranquility would be nice

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

God is in the storms, but He is also in control of ALL the weather. Very beautiful write, and lovely accompanying photo; sheer perfection! BRAVA, Karla, very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D