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Haiku: Jiffy Pop Pop P o p!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Each and every afternoon, the clouds build up, rain themselves out, and squash summer's heat. Been below normal, temperature wise ... enjoying it. :)

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


Poem Artwork


exploding through the
atmosphere like popping corn --
late afternoon storms

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (8/1)

 
 


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Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
popping corn -- only a poet could find them.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed on August 2, 2007
We could use a cool down, a great write thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Well Karla, I don't mind the storm as long as I'm not in it.They can be rather refreshing. Like Fee says here we are suffering with the heat and looking for a way to cool things down.
Thnaks for sharing. Rose

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Dear Karla,

I know you don't like storms but they really can be refreshing, don't you think? As for me, I love them. They really make all my senses come alive.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Sounds like here in El Paso....stormy weather has been with us for a few weeks...and it looks like rain outside...once again...

Nice work...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Good haiku, Karla. Enjoyed!

George

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
good one. popping corn. That's British, isn't it? cute

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Then we must have your heat and sunshine up this way...90's and bright sunshine predicted all this week...Ed

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
I'm related to this phenomenol magic for the rain's passion boils in my own blood.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Fantastic pic and write!
Enjoyed!

Love and Hugs,
Patricia

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Your pic goes well with your poem Karla, love Holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Well as I struggle with the heat up here I sure wish we could get a thunder and lighting storm here to clear the air...got any to spare?

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
That's Texas for you! Never know what you are going to get from one year to the next. Could be worse you know, if winter, it might be ice.......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Texas has had it's share of rain?
Lurve ya!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
They poppin and pop out, a spoon full of sugar, and Mary Popinins may poppin...

The title had me concerned...lol

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Really cute. I like the pop pop. Victor

Reviewed by Lori Maynard
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Cute! Haiku, right? Yes, they really do just seem to explode out of nowhere and then disappear. I like the picture too

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Fantasti pic and ku Karla. Really makes a great impact,to match the pop!!!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on August 1, 2007
I love it, dearest Karla! What fantastic... and yummy ;0)... imagery!
This is brilliant!
Love & many {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
We are having a little bit of it, the noise I mean, no popcorn falling yet.
Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
But a bit more scary
I love a passing storm
They are a part of us here
Enjoyed this excellent write

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Excellent write, love the title and pic! Very well done, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Pop, pop, pop indeed! :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Pop, Pop, Pop, Indeed! And pass the salt, please!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
cool write

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
I'll have some, no butter please. Nice write.

Dan


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