Haiku (5/7/5): BBW (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 1, 2007

I'm growing increasingly fond of Haiku, Karla. This reminds me why. You frame your thoughts in concise and delicious irony.

Blessings,
Keith

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 29, 2007

Another excellent write Karla, I seem to be slipping on my reviews
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

a beautiful and creative write
peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Yep, yep, but when she's a sliver of her full self, she's not quite so beautiful. Wish that applied to me!!!!!!! lol

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Absolutely NOT!!!!! A wonderful capture, Karla... only full-fat will do in this case! A creamy, dreamy delight. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

OH, Oh, oh! I love it!!! And she's so sensual too. Even the oceans are pulled by her magnetism. --Charlie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Woildn't want any less of the moon's perfection either.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

LOL,,,, toooooo funny,,

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

A howling good one.

Walt

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Hahahaha!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

She truly is a Full Figured Beauty!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Her big brother, the sun, probably like a brother, picks on her though...e

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Wonderful 'ku, Karla; and written with class. BBW, go out and flaunt all you have; show the world that we rule!! Be proud of what you have! If the moon can show her stuff, you can too! :) Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

This was really cute! Made me smile this morning,Karla!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

No because she came into vogue when the Gods deemed voluptuous was the true beauty of womanhood. Great Ku.

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

...and she has so many frekcles...
Georg

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

lol -very cute! women's weight and feeling of fullness comes and goes with the moon's too - my body asks me what to do - i think she'd be horrified and have full rights to rebel if i went for any of that gunk! Good poem Karla -enjoyed :o) Nicky xx (mmm...looking forward to breakfast now!)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

She was voluptuous...was she not? The full moon was apt to insire me also.
Love, Amor

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

She's hiding behind the clouds here. Nicely done, Karla. Merci! Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

hah!!so very clever!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on November 27, 2007

Ohh, how cute is that!
Well penned and a nice pic, too!
R~