Tanka 2: Parting, Such Sweet Sorrow (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

WOW! I love it!! Tanka is normally not my favorite form of poetry because so much goes unsaid. But... you just ruined my opinion of it! hee, hee... This is fabulous.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

I think you've met your form, Karla. These are a smooth as honeybutter, and just as sweet. --Charlie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Karla,
Your romantic side is showing. Nicely said~
Sheila

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Sweet and lovely, both verse and view. Thank you for sharing, Karla.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Beautiful verse to go with the splendid photo...
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

WOW! Great poem, written cleverly and love that photo!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheoxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Very effective and such a splendid graphic to accompany.

fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Oh I know this, great Tanka, especially because you used the Moon...
Much Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Mar - velous! As is that graphic.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

I don't see Mars as I am totally commited to Venus!!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Clever and beautiful...and I love the photograph!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

cute and clever!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Very witty and sweet you do great with the Tanka!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

You are so clever and talented! There's more to this than meets the eye, I think.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Beauty in these verses thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

... perhaps a luminous lipstick to be remembered on the moons lip forever.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Such beautiful memories being savored for the next meeting. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Gotta have dem memories . . . Very nice Karla . . .

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Beautiful write and picture, Karla; very well penned and illustrated! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Brilliant! They do it every day :)
Such Majestic order within the universe.

Hugzzzz
Ch'erie

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

great stars Karla, thanks for getting us off this cold rock for a few seconds

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

I am sure that kiss will hold them over,,,,,hmmm depending on if it was a good kiss now that I think about it,,,:) Once again,, your imagination is just awesome!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Indeed! It will be a long time before this happens again but...the kiss was sweet and lingers still.
Blessings and love,
Susan