Early Morn Wake Up (Double 'Ku) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

My prayer for your dad, done before my reply to your poem was written. I like the positive feel your poem gives me when you so clearly say, "it's the Eastern sun". That puts everything into the proper perspective. "New possibilities and blessings, given". Need we ask more? An excellent poem to remind us of what is truly important in life and where our blessing originate. With Him. Thanks dear lady. May peace be always with you. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 7, 2008

Sure will pray for your dad as soon as getting into my bed tonight. Nice double Haiku and blessings are going to come your way. Each day is a new beginning and you are able to live through it and be helpful to all you meet. Fine write again I have to tell you.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

I will pray for your dad.. Great picture...M

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Love the description of a newly dawning day.

Cryssa

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

I will remember your Dad in my prayers Karla, blessings love Holly

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

...the big eye in the sky blinking open... pretty visual, and great philosophy, Karla. I totally agree. --Charlie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Your poem is stunning, I am praying for your Dad.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Perfect pair of Haiku's Karla. I wish the best for your dad's health. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Absolutely Karla. Give him my best.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

...and the skies...opened with a prayer.

my well wishes and prayers for your father Karla...
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Love the back to backs and they say so much about ther reality of the morning. Sorry to hear about your dad but will keep my fingers crossed for him.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Beautiful ,Karla! I'll put your dad on the
boards,and keep him in prayer!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

You dad is a lucky man, to have two of you to love...ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

The prayers are granted, as well with a strong wish of peace.

Georg

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

lovely haiku and yes I will say a prayer for your Dad!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Lovely haiku's Karla...sorry to hear about your dad, will send prayers his way
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Wonderfully written Karla...what a beautiful morning!!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Wonderful picture and excellent poem my friend...I too like Jeanette love the line "peeling eyes open" very well done, I will add your dad to our prayer list tonight!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

A wonderful write Karla and yes your daddy will be in our prayers along with you and Karen. Take care cause we do care.

Newfie Hugs and prayers are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

You've painted a wonderful word picture for waking up in the morning. Especially liked: "peeling eyes open
to new possibilities".

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Beautiful picture and words written. My heart goes out to you, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Beautiful write, and you bet I'll be praying for our daddy!! Very well penned/illustrated; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

a very nice write--sorry about your dad

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Our best wishes and prayers, are on the way.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Nice write, Karla. Prayers sent your way.