Witch's Brew (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

Your name sure fits this poem! You can imagine the storm brewing. I loved the metaphors.

Mary

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

What a picture.! The forces of nature are at work!....M

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 20, 2008

THAT is one incredible photo, Karla!

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

OGRESS!!! Have you been making cottage cheese above Texas when you should have been milking? Hmmm!? --Charlie

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

This is a great shot...awesome

Well done

Allen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Click your heels together 3 times and repeat "There's no place like home." Right now you have just described what is happening outside my doors. And penned so well. If the wind blows from the east I could land in Kansas. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Powerful write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Not a very pleasant sight to awaken to. Well described.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Karla this is an incredible glimpse at the storm.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Your imagery is superb,Karla, and I feel the oppression such a sky creates.Always a pleasure to read you! ET

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

A very nasty looking sky, indeed.
Made the hair on the back of me neck stand up,
Arrrr.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Very creative Karla,,,, this is one brew we can do without.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Boy, Karla, that was an ugly sky: thought we were going to buy the farm for a minnit! LOL Very well penned/imaged/illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

And when those sirens went off---NICE. Add to the fear factor! LOL

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Wao, what an aweful sight! You sure have your hands full with the weather alone!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

Wow this entertaining and clever write bubbles off the page as from a cauldron...well done Karla.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

The sky...a cauldron that could rival any witch's brew.
Frightening, Karla, and you tell it so well. I hope the
witch mounts her broom and flies away SOON. - gene.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

I've experienced such a Witch's Brew,
And I'm very glad, that yours is through.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 19, 2008

The storms seem to be getting more violent around here too. Mostly at night and late afternoons. They don't last long, but while they are going on it is frightening, especially at nights. I am here alone and get quite scared.