Haawwwtttt !! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

I hope you have A.C. in your place..Its the dog days of summer!......M

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

lazy hazy days of summer -- turned into the dog days of summer in your part of the world - whew, sounds hot -- God bless --JMW

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Sorry about the heat waves dear, GA is hot but yours is blazing hot

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Then seething heat of the season is well depicted in this wonderful poem. thanks dear Karla. Your friend and brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

"miasma?" gorgeous word! ...all those liquid letters running together. This write is delicious. Can I have another bite? (Thew! I spit out the seeds, and let the juicey words squoosh over my teeth again...)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Karla, there's nothing funny about the heat - except
the way you tell it. -gene.

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

i can feel the heat from here..lol

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

good expression of summer heat

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Coming Autumn you will be wishing it was still Summer! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Just don't become a pothole!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Excellent visuals, Karla; you made us feel the heat of a Texas summer (and I'm not saying that 'cause we LIVE here!). Very well penned; thank GOD for central air!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

LOVE the pic; the picture even LOOKS hot!! WHEW!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

I like the way you combined yourself with a part of a living city...well done and yea I'll be looking for Autumn too especially September when I go to Loudon NH to see my first NASCAR race.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Hi Karla,I can't stand the heat especially when the humidity is very high and the dew point is around 60 plus.Last week we had a heatwave that lasts 7 days.I love the spring,fall and winter,but not the summer lol.I enjoy reading this poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Its cooled off a bit here in NJ...at night, like right now its 74 but last night was down to 62, really good sleeping weather...stay off that black top, but if necessary, be sure to wear shoes...Ed

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

I can relate Karla its hot here too, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Funny Karla and very well said.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Sounds absolutely miserable. And here I sit with a horrible summer cold - totally oblivious to all that is going on. I trust Dolly's mess was not in your neck of the 'woods.

Take care and stay off the pavement. God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Well don't know if you noticed but you're also talking to the pavement...check it out...you've got an acrostic - PS hi - yea, if you're gonna wear asphalt on the tread of your shoes, you might as well get acquainted! Nice conversation with Haawwwtttt, Karla...

Love,
Sage