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Fair Trade
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... she can't stay mad ....

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman.


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The evidence in your hand,
the purloined cookies crumbled
around the mouth, down the shirt,
the ones that suddenly leave
a bad taste for having been

busted.

You can feel it coming, the
gathering storm:  the air sucked
from the room, danger sparking
from unhappy eyes, rolls of
thunder fixing to drop on

your head.

Puppy eyes.  That's what you give:
lips trembling, you look up at
Mommy and say, "I didn't
mean to take 'em."  Instead of
the strike, she takes you in her

arms and

holds you next to her heart:  she
can't stay mad at her little
man.  Especially when
they exchange puppy eyes for
a spanking:  fast thinking on

his part.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (8/6)

 


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 Reviews of "Fair Trade"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
I can't speak about kids, but I know my dogs have escaped punishment many times because of their big, brown eyes! Gotta love them. Fun poem with lots of truth!
Sheila

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
This is cute, Karla. I wonder just how many "puppy eyes" have turned away a spanking. We mom's are easily deluded by those innocent looks.

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Very nice.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
precious...perhaps all humans should grow "puppy eyes", we might be more forgiving

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
Karla... been missing you, so ventured to your site again.. have read some great stuff today...some I'd already read and liked, but I keep wanting to know more about you... and this puppy one is so precious... Loving arms and sad eyes always seem to do the trick! good writing as always... lindalaw

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
Lol. I playfully call my Belle "Monster Puppy"
You have a thief, I have a Houdini.
But the eyes are the same.
Well done.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
Both dogs and kids are true Masters of The Puppy Eye! (I try using it on my wife, but it never works, darn it.)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
Excellent Karla, well done. I can see both my litle one and our pups doing this. Nice write my friend.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Karla, this is very very good indeed.
John

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Ha! I got me one of those too... my guy says, "Aw, Mom!..." I gotta chuckle.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Rufuz does the same thing to me...e

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
yes It is really hard to stay mad at children for doing what comes naturally to them, hands in cookie jars, mud on feet, bugs in bottles and great big hugs are all part of being kids.


This is really good Karla.
Fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Cute and very smart I might add. Thank you karla for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
awwwww this is adorable,,, who can resist puppy dog eyes?

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
AN adorable and enjoyable poem to read.Very cute.I like reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
adorable and so like us to love our pets this way. Too bad all don't!
Love it Karla!...ET

Reviewed on August 6, 2008
LOL love this write, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Nothing cuter than a little boy caught with his hand in the cookie jar. Loved it.

Mary

Reviewed by R. Armstrong (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Cute.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
...great write found in sweet innocence...I like this one Karla.
very well done...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
awe!!

Reviewed on August 6, 2008
Karla~

Those puppy dog eyes will get 'em, every time!! Adorable write; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D


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