deep azure blue sky, no humidity there -- what a magnificent photo -- you captured the duplicate blossoms with perfection -- a spot on Haiku, too -- stay safe and happy -- JMW
This photo and your poem, really touches my visual mind and soul. Very nicely done...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2008
Karla, everybody else has already said it - it's beautiful :-)
But it is something else, as well. The haiku is an Eastern form and it does have rules which have nothing to do with the 5/7/5 structure. It is seldom that a Western person correctly does a haiku. The first two lines set elements of a scene or stage. The final line says something about that scene or stage. Karla, you have DONE it!!!
Just posted this, and now you're up to three reviews!! Make it four: Mine! LOL Unless someone pops in before I get this in! LOL Very beautiful write and piccy; perfect combination!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
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Sheila
This is a beauty about beauty.
Thank you, Karla.
Love and best wishes,
Regis.
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
John
Newfie hugs, Rose
Sandie Angel :o)
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
But it is something else, as well. The haiku is an Eastern form and it does have rules which have nothing to do with the 5/7/5 structure. It is seldom that a Western person correctly does a haiku. The first two lines set elements of a scene or stage. The final line says something about that scene or stage. Karla, you have DONE it!!!
Ichi ban, tak san :-)
Ted
Just posted this, and now you're up to three reviews!! Make it four: Mine! LOL Unless someone pops in before I get this in! LOL Very beautiful write and piccy; perfect combination!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
hugs
Fee