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Ode to Storm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... No corner of my room will escape your careful attention to detail. ....

Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman


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You sweep in
like a massive broom
bent on cleaning:

Poking under the bed,
you raise the dust
of a thousand years 
on the stong back
of a lightning bolt.
You raise your voice
in a cannonade
of thunder and
shake the sheets of
Earth with wind and rain.

You tremble the rugs,
beating them with hail
until they sparkle.
No corner of my room
will escape the
careful attention
to detail:

all will be spotless
when you are through.

And when the air clears,
you rainbow hope
against the sky
and in my eyes.

The air smells sweet.

Renewed. 

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (10/29)


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 Reviews of "Ode to Storm"
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
I loved this poem, as well as all of your writings, I missed you, but I am slowly renewed, thank you for that
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
Great imagery in this one, Karla!
Sheila

Reviewed on October 30, 2008
Beautiful, Beutiful. This is sooooooo beautiful Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 30, 2008
Great explanation Karla. Well done once again my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 30, 2008
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 30, 2008
Great lines as always Karla. I'll never cease to enjoy your pens.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Skillful and fun offering, Karla. I loved the way you got so much motion into this poem. Did you get that cleaning lady's card, I think I could use her once a week.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Karla,
Excellent technique and the multiple ways of interpreting leave the reader wondering and surmising in the best possible fashion.
John

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Karla, just when I think you've described weather to a "T", you come up with a new poem that surpasses the last. Great stuff! ~ Sara

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Karla did I ever tell you I LOVE YOUR POEMS??... well I DO!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Girl, you could just knock these out with one hand tied behind your back! The Muses love you, Ms. Poet! :)

Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Karla,

You import such depth of word meaning into all your poetry - marvelous!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
A fabulous array of interpretations accompany this clean sweep, Karla... could be Spring, could be the next Perfect Storm, could be the ridding of germs through fever... unless it's my mind that's over heating! :)) Your images are always sharp and clear. It's true - you need to publish your unique, Stormspinning takes. You always create a clean air around your work. Good one! xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Karla, you just keep knocking out one beauty after another! Fantabulous!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Outstanding poem, Karla. I think it may be stronger without the last line...what do you think? This is highly publishable... get to work, girl. --Charlie

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Sounds like good sex to me...

Rebecca

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
And nothing--nothing!--escapes Karla's artistic hand.
Metaphorically yours, -gene.

Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Superb verse, Karla, and awesome piccy! GREAT job; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Your writing is superb...it simply comes alive. :~)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Great writing sweet lady...take care OK...HUgssss

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
I love your opening; catches your attention and holds you there. I also like your personification of the storm, even though I don't read this as a literal storm, but more metaphorically for a stormy relationship (but that's just me). Clever piece, well done! Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Wow Karla you created another Masterpiece. Well done. Hope you are all feelin better. Loves and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
It does always amaze me that after a storm things seem almost revitalized and fresh again as if thrown in a clothes washer and spun out. Good write Karla.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
A marvelous Ode to Storm!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 29, 2008
Yes, love it, don't fear a little sabel rasling from the skies, after all you are a Veteran and not allergic to a few shots with blancks.

Georg



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