Day Trippin' (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 24, 2009

Love the first and second stanzas! Makes me want to come along with you!!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed on March 17, 2009

Oh, I love "shampoo my cares away..."! If you can't be warm, then the next best thing is a lovely warm poem. :) (())

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

must be the Gulf of Mexico Karla -- a photograph to bring back memories of summer weather -- your poem is so relaxing, yet invigorating with promise -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

Great images ,picture and poem. A good way to take a trip! It costs nothing!......M

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

I can practically feel the sun. Love the creative description in verse 1. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Your imagination had me there enjoying your Uni-Verse.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Karla, you had me worried, for us baby boomers "tripping" has a whole different meaning. However, I enjoyed this very much. I have moved back to South Florida, but I still never go in the water. Just sit and watch it.

Bobbi

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Sounds like you are having one big free sauna party...if only in your mind!
I'll meet ya there! Cute poem!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

This is a great antidote to what I just posted, Karla. Truly a relief and a joy. Thank you. Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Beautiful writing indeed...would love to be there with you sweet lady..enjoy...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Wanna come along on our cruise down to the Keys when old Matlack fixes up that old wooden boat??!!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Only if we can go skinny-dipping ! ! ! :-) LOL

Georg

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

omgoodnessme -this poem gave me pangs! i must close my eyes -see you there! xx

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Karla, I'd love to enter your imagination with you
and share the warmth and wavesong of your special beach.
-gene.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Yeppers, temp standing at a steady 36 here for the last 24 hours, like it got stuck or something. Where is that balmy beach? Need some of that :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Beautiful write and you wouldn't have to twist my arm to leave the snow and ice of the cold outside to go to your beach instead.

Fee

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

I always love the beach. It's soothing and relaxing. Good write, Karla!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

sitting on the beach, the
breeze parts my hair into
sections, so the sun can
shampoo my cares away.
what great pictures you paint.....Imagination is sometimes even better!

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Karla you never cease to amaze me. Only the StormSpinner could write a stanza such as:

sitting on the beach, the
breeze parts my hair into
sections, so the sun can
shampoo my cares away.

I'm of the opinion that you're amongs the best of today's poets. Keep writing my friend and I'll keep enjoying the genius of your pen.

Hugs from sunny California,
Marcia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

love love love the ocean,, and miss it terribly!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Clear water, certainly isn't NJ...such a nice place to dream of though...(can I come too? Rufuz) & Ed

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

You need to come to Cali so we can take you the beach and not only in your imagination LOL! Keep these coming and be blessed
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Oh "sigh" how I miss the ocean and this is just a lovely reminder...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Karla,
As always your touch is sure and here it's delicate, too; "so the sun can shampoo my cares away"...lovely lovely image.
John

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Imaginary or not, it was a great trip to the seashore...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

I think if you get any more relaxed, you'll slip into a coma! LOL Ohhh, this one is relaxing on a rainy, cold spring Texas evening! Very well penned/illustrated; brava!

Next time you go cruisin', I'm with you! LOL (Was this trip really necessary?? LOLOLOL)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

LOL That's just great. Made me want to join you. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Oh Karla, it sounds beautiful! I am there!!Love this.

With Love,
Cindy