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Haiku: Monochromatic (5/7/5)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman


Poem Artwork

mercurial brush
silvers monochromatic --
all lost to the mist

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (4/21)

 


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 Reviews of "Haiku: Monochromatic (5/7/5)"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Great depiction of fog and mist...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 25, 2009
a magnificent haiku and very professional photograph to compliment it -- peace and love, Karla -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 24, 2009
Fantastic! An artist sees beauty in this. I once took a pic that was underexposed. It was of a friend of mine. Trying to do an artsy thing with her in the grass holding a lily. The background was completely dark and all you could see was her face, arm and lily illuminated with light. It was beautiful. As is this ku, Karla!!

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2009
very different ...

Reviewed by Jake George (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2009
I have not responded to your work for quite some time, but I still take time to read it.

Loved the Haiku

Jake

Reviewed on April 23, 2009
Excellent. Be well, Kathy

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Karla,
Very classy, stylish writing and a perfect image to match.
John

Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Your poem and the image really touches me Karla. I detest fog - almost got attached once while walking my dog on a foggy night. Luckily another stranger came to my rescue. Your poetry never ceases to amaze me. You're one of the finest contemporary poets I know of.
Best of Everything,
Marcia

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Wonderful depth in this gem Ku Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Yummy. Wants me to imagine in the mist. Lovely pic and words. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
That picture reminds me of Moscow's Gorky Park hiding under the fog, your haiku, that you are a first class poet!

Georg


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Unique and much enjoyed......great job Karla!

Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Hi Karla, I love how your writing and your photos blend so well together... wonderful write!!!! :]

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Very accomplished, Karla. Lovely assonances and alliteration. Fabulous tone and mood which match your subject well. Mist ssssssmmmmmmmothers in this write! :)) xx

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Great writing sweet lady...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
very nice!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Another great write you share with us Karla, thank you so much.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
But found once more, in your pen!

Reviewed on April 22, 2009
Wonderful write, Karla; nothing dull or monochromatic about your writings or photography! Keep up the great work! Very well penned and imaged; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on April 21, 2009
This is a great write, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 21, 2009
Looks like your having ground clouds down your way...just a bit froggy there, LOL, Ed


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