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Made You Look
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Jerry Bolton's 'Nameless Girl' in part inspired these lines - you naughty boy. =]

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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... wind blowing so hard, it
flips up the flirt of sky,
exposing her dirty
side.  Look - no underwear:
just an invitation
for a little wild sex
before she calls your name
for the last time.  She's got
your number, believe me:
but what a way to go.  =]

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (8/8)


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 Reviews of "Made You Look"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Karla, you conjured up this little twister of sexy humor like the true StormSpinner of poetry you really are -- gotta love it -- peace and love my friend --Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Now who's naughty, Karla? lol! Nice to see this side to your writing. Different and FuN. We don't get to see your flirty/sensual side nearly enough:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Wow! The spicey Karla emerges. Cute write; made me laugh.

Anna

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
You did make me look, be proud.

bobbi

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
You did make me look... lol rich!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Delightfully enticing, Karla. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
nice to visualize ;)

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Very clever. And I like the pic too, so fitting. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed on August 9, 2009
This brought a grin. Nicely done, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Karla, This is really cute and fun...:)hmmm hot too...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Karla...you've turned a cloudy day into a sunny one! Thanks for the smile this morning!

Reviewed on August 8, 2009
LOL love it, thank you for sharing, I needed the laugh today
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Love it with such a smiling voice...

fee

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
LOL...very clever poem, Karla. ~ Sara

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Karla,
You've bounced right back...and how well, you naughty thing1 Love this!

John

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
This is great. Love it.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Love it! Rebecca

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
yep, made me look...cute. LadyJ

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
you little tease, what a naughty/nice, bit of fun;-) Well done, Karla!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
You made me look...and from what I saw, it was all good.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Different, Karla. Well written but a little off your trail. ;-)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Karla, so glad you exposed the lighter side
of storm spinning. -gene.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
...WHAT A WAY TO GO...TO WHERE? GOTCHA! MADE YOU LOOK...(SMILE)
THIS IS A GREAT WRITE...GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND
BLESSINGS. JOYCE* HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Karla getting Saucy eh...
Go Stormspinner..
;) Chezza

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
" She's got
your number," You said a mouthful there Karla, especially since Cassondrah (her real name) has been controlling Joe for decades without his knowning it

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Whoo Hoo! You found a clue! Sometimes ya gotta let the pen go where it wants to. Patrick

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Karla, I didn't know you did like Jerry's vampires, and ones without underwear not less! LOL

Georg


Reviewed on August 8, 2009
No wonder they call you the StormSpinner: everywhere you go, you leave your mark! LOL (And not debris, either! LOL) Delightful write; well penned/imaged! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Reluctant Chase Partner. :D

Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Karla,

Really funny! (but so unKarla like)

Mary


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