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Looks Can Be Deceiving (5/7/5 format)
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the crepe myrtle  d
                                 r
                                  o
                                  o
                                 p
                               s,
but not nearly as much as
i do in this heat  ----

too hot to do much
of anything except to
stay under a/c ----

have gotten waaaay too
used to creature comforts.  the
flowers have no choice ----

they know fall's coming.
how can something so fragile
be stronger than i?

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (7/21)

 

 


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 Reviews of "Looks Can Be Deceiving (5/7/5 format)"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
Karla, crepe myrtle are among nature's most vibrant and colorful plants. Also one of my personal favorites. And you are so right when you ask how, "how can anything so fragile,be stronger than I"? Stay cool and hydrated you Texas flower. We need you blooming for a long time. May you know only love, peace and joy my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 24, 2010
Nice creativity in this poem, Karla. Feeling your words today in this heat. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 24, 2010
Ooops there goes another rubber tree plant. Patrick

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on July 22, 2010
Lovely ku's Karla and I am so glad that I am one who enjoys the heat, it is the winters that bring me down...
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 22, 2010
Incredibly hot here in Milan, too...all over Italy, actually!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 22, 2010
Nice one, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2010
Did you ever wonder how a blade of grass presses its way through concrete? A power greater than ourselves. Nice work again, as always Karla. Hope it cools down. We had one week of blinding heat here in LA. Now it's back to gloom.

Reviewed on July 21, 2010
Karla this is a great poem and believe it is one I think we can all relate to
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 21, 2010
love the imagery in the poem... :~)
but more than that I love the thought provoking last stanza.

I've missed reading you as I have been away for so long. Hope all is well with you!
Hugs,
Cryssa

Reviewed on July 21, 2010
Know what you mean about the heat, Karla: it zaps me too! Great write; love the creativity in this! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 21, 2010
Purty, both pic and po...e

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 21, 2010
Yes Karla I think we are all feeling the same...even up here in Nova Scotia the heat is crazy...
fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 21, 2010
oh, i love the last line! So delicate, yet strong


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