rip·tide (-tīd′)
noun
a current opposing other currents, producing violently disturbed water; esp., the strong, narrow flow of sea water that rushes seaward after incoming waves pile up on the shore
A Rip Tide
By Amber "V" Moonstone 7/16/08
Have you ever been caught up in a Rip Tide?
You can’t go anywhere,
No matter how fast you try to swim,
You just tread water and stay in the same place.
Life can seem as though you are caught up in a Rip Tide.
You work long hours, sleep less, and eat irregularly.
feeling as though you don’t seem to be getting ahead of expenses,
No matter how much you conserve, it doesn’t seem to make a difference.
Energy costs are skyrocketing in this country,
You sometimes decide between gas for your car
Or buying groceries for the week.
You can get quite depressed over this economy.
When you feel like you are treading water,
Sometimes just a glance at a loved one,
Or the sound of the birds greeting the morning sun,
Can trigger the release of your anxieties.
You must remain calm,
Go with the flow of the your rip tide,
Stop fighting the waves of anxiety,
And find a way to swim to a safe shore.
Safety is the key to happiness,
When you feel safe,
You begin to erase, all the negativity
that keeps you captive to your rip tidal wave.
Slow down, relax, make safe shore,
a priority for the next few weeks,
seeking calmness of mind, body, and spirit,
No sinking beneath the rip tides of your life.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" Moonstone
later, michael
kudos
your friend jill curry
I am not a beach swimming person
when there I stay close to shore
But I can swim my butt off in a swimming pool
Love & Peace be with you
William
newfie Hugs, Rose
This makes me think of Bob Dylan's lyrics.."you'd better start swimming or you'll sink like a stone"... as when we are so overwhelmed it is a feeling of drowning. Your poem it full of positive energy and advice!
Love, Christine
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
Oh The Photo & Those 2 faces in there is awsome!
Great Write, and life can indeed cause us to tred
or panic & drown. It is very important to relax & Breath...
These Sorts Of Things Are Now Being Placed On Prescription Med Info Papers After the medication information. I was like wow!
& Now Seeing Your Write....
as Vickie takes a deep breath....ahhh yes...much better :)
Love The Write
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Fee
there is not enough hours in a day for me
No time to even red and review daily
I'm caught up in a rip tide
Excellent write and advice!!
Call you Sat
Peace Love and Light..and hugsss...Morning Star
wisdom in this poem.
Harold M. Nash
Having been caught in a Rip, you capture it perfectly. Can't go anywhere, except out to sea - panic sets in. Oh, God, you're going under: relax. Swim parallel to shore. You'll get out of it and will be able to get back to a safe place. I know. :) Great metaphor/anology to just relax and let it flow. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I think everybody should take time out for themselves and smell the roses so to speak.Just have space to themselves and find a quiet place in their homes or whereever and think about what makes them happy.I enjoy reading your poem and the message it sends.I will not let a rip tide drown me out from complete happiness and neither should you or any other poet/writer in the Author's Den.Take care of yourself
Edwin