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Peace in the Morning (revised)
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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I wrote this two years, mostly out of imagination. Last night, August 25, 2010, this entire thing came true ! I was never so scared in my life. August in the desert is no fun.


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Bolts of lightning split the ebony sky, turning night into day
The thunder roared as the rain assaulted the window panes
Wind was blowing and starting to howl, it was so fierce now,
The rain was lying down.
 
Tree limbs fell from the stormy sky; leaves askew all over
the muddy ground.    Ice began to pound the house, huge golf balls
were falling all around.   They fell apart when they hit the grass, leaving
melting shards of glass.
 
The cruel wind bullied a tree, and pushed it on the roof of a house.
The leaves and branches jumped up and down, ‘til the tree gave
Way and hit the ground.
 
Objects left on lawns were now birds flying around, smashing into
one another, an awful sound. A child’s swing set fell against the
house, smashing the back door. And in the kitchen, six
inches of water standing and running on the floor. 
 
Mercifully, morning came, the rain and wind had stopped. The sun
was shining,  quiet at last.   But as the people looked around to see
the awful damage that had been done,  even with newborn peace ,
they knew  that Mother Nature's fury would once again be unleashed. 
 
                                                      Mary E. Lacey  
                                                          2008
 
       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Peace in the Morning (revised)"
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
very frightening for you, Mary. It's amazing how after a storm it can be so peaceful. Laurel

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
wow your images are amazing. Well done

hug
kathy

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
Such incredible imagery....told with power!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Thank you for sharing this experience, Mary. It certainly makes one reflect upon the power of nature. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on May 21, 2010
My goodness! I sure can identify with this Mary. Where I live we were hit severely hit by three Hurricanes, and have yet to recover! What devastation...yet "Peace in the Morning" An excellent write Mary, thank you for sharing so powerfully!


Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Leann Marshall
Reviewed on September 1, 2009
I'm sure many people can identify with this raging storm--so much of the country has experienced them this summer.
Beautiful imagery. I like, "The cruel wind bullied a tree..."
Leann

Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on April 6, 2009
The wrath of Mother Nature -- that last paragraph captures the peace all must feel after a horrific storm. I liked it! Susan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 17, 2008
That's why I love storms. They are necessary, but can be evil at times.

Ron

Reviewed by Mildred Kisor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
Mary your words send chills down my spine for I have seen, and felt the storms also. Good write. Mildred

Reviewed on August 13, 2008
MARY - WELL DONE! GLAD DAMAGES WERE LIMITED TO THINGS - NOT FAMILY!

TOM.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
This really brings alive the fear and strength of a hurricane, scary and well done.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
Wonderfully done, Mary - with all the power of the big blow
you describe. -gene.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
Oh boy! You describe this horror excellently. I've experienced a little of each of the weather condtions you mention, but not all together like you experienced. Glad you came through well and whole. Blessings.

Reviewed on August 12, 2008
great descriptive, have seen this before and it is all you sahy and more,

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
wonderfully visual poem

Reviewed on August 12, 2008
You certainly took me there in the middle of it Mary, wonderful imagery and ambience. Great poem.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 11, 2008
Outstanding write Mary
and yes I know about hurricains
got caught in the path of 4 of them back in 2004
in an area that had not seen hurricains in 45 years
had just moved into my house only 2 months prior.
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
--power more immense than we can ever imagine -- and you captured it, just so -- God bless --JMW

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
This is awesome!!!!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Mother Nature truly seems to be on the warpath these days, and I fear many more violent storms are on the way. And I never saw true fury until I visited New Orleans shortly after Hurricane Katrina.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
A stunning descriptive poem, Mary! You kept me enthralled from start to finish! sorry if you had to go through it, just the poems action is enough for me,thank you!;-)...ET

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
Very well done..enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugsssss

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
You capture the intensity and force with a great choice of verbs, Mary, and they carry the poem home well.
John

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
wow that is quite descriptive...makes me glad to live in the north


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