"Fiery moonlight
Spilling like molten lava
From heaven above!
Sunset paves the road
To the moon and stars beyond
Imagination!"
These are very nice lines. Moonlight spilling like molten lava" is one I wish I had written! Great.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2011
When II first saw the picture I thought those long stems of flowers were swords stuck into the ground. This poem is about peace and gentle ways and II live it.
Bless your muse and bless you Anna. They're all wonderful but the last one keeps playing it's melody in my mind. That's a good thing because my mind was all cluttered up this morning.
Hugs,
Marcia
Your words are so peaceful and lovely. One senses a feeling of perfect tranquility on your Lake Ku; serenity runs through your words like a small ripple on a calm lake! A beautiful read.
All lovely, your Lake 'Kus, and they all make me yearn for some more Lake Wandering. I especially like the second one since I, too, find Dawn on a Lake to be so tranquil and soothing.
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Peace
Tony
Hugs,
Christine
Spilling like molten lava
From heaven above!
Sunset paves the road
To the moon and stars beyond
Imagination!"
These are very nice lines. Moonlight spilling like molten lava" is one I wish I had written! Great.
Hugs,
Marcia
Joy L. Hale
My favorite is the one about fiery moonlight.
Have so much fun there,
Christine