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From The Deep
by Annabel Sheila → (All Poetry by Annabel Sheila)
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They arose from the sea as the setting sun Turned the evening sky into fire! Standing there at the water’s edge They were everything men desired! Scantily clad in seaweed green Flawless bodies perfection! They were sent from Neptune’s deep To roam without detection! Human greed and carelessness Had poisoned Neptune’s realm! The time for reckoning had come at last Now he was at the helm! In the ocean deep where no one could see The end was drawing near! Where the sea once teemed with vibrant life Now Neptune wept black tears! So they walked among them freely Teasing them with their guile! And led them all, one by one To their death, sea siren style! © Annabel Sheila

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Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

A FINE WORK, ANNABEL...A WARNING. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Oooooo! I like. Don't mess with Neptune. Patrick

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 3, 2012

Wow� Revenge of the deep. Thanks for pointing out that we shouldn't mess with old Neptune or the Creature from the Deep Lagoon will come back to haunt us from the 1950s!

;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

So true, Anna, my far northern friend. Sadly so true. Great poem that should make all of us think.
Your friend; Mark

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

What a tale Anna, vivid imagery, great work!
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

Whoa, a cautionary tale and a warning well delivered.

"Where the sea once teemed with vibrant life
Now Neptune wept black tears!"

Powerful language.
You keep expanding your vistas, tone and subject matter.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

Captivating imagery both light and dark ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

As an old sailor from the Maritimes this one speaks to me on many levels. Love the poem although it is a sad message it conveys.
fee

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

Truly a Fascinating write and very meaningful as always great writing Laura

Reviewed by k.stojku@gmail.com Stojku (Reader)

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

This poem is very beautiful. Thanks that you tagged me.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

Annabel,
Okay one morereason to know more about who you know. or just be absinent.
Budd

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

More, tell us more. Is there no escape? You can't leave us hanging like that.... Still, being led rather than driven might not be a bad way to go. Dick

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

I have been hearing in relentless ways about how we are destroying this planet. I don't think so. So femme fatale murder is the answer. Why not?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 1, 2012

Yikes! But I wouldn't blame old Neptune for unleashing his fury on mankind the way we now pollute and pilfer and destroy his domain.

PS: Can you ask him to unleash his Sea Sirens on the Jersey shore? I owe my old devilish brother in New Jersey a good scare. Thanks.

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