Day at the Shore (poem) by Annabel Sheila on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 2, 2013

you too?? I crave the shore as well as often being around Mountains and forests that are so still the only sound is my pen etching on paper the passion in my soul-Love this poem!!!

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on April 1, 2013

Just out back Anna experiencing what you describe in your poem, magnificent! The apartment building where I live sits on the Detroit river, the view is awesome. I bask in the sun with the birds & feed them while they honor God with songs of praise. Thank you for this poem Anna and I am loving it. You are a blessing to us all and as I write my healing prayer to God for you is in the universe and at His throne. Peace!!!

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on March 30, 2013

Wonderful expressive and impressive poetry!

I pray you are feeling better Annabel.

Happy Resurrection Sunday!

Peace, love, joy and hope of the Lord be with you!

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on March 29, 2013

Summers in Newfoundland must be one of the best kept secrets of all time. But no more. You've told all. Now brace yourself for a flood of visitors replete in straw hats, bermudas, and knobby knees. A super write. Glad you're feeling better.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 29, 2013

I hope you feel better soon, and I hope you can soon visit that lovely shore.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on March 29, 2013

Sorry you have been unwell...your poem is beautiful!

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

A day at the shore sounds Splendid my friend, Have a Happy Easter(Hugs) Laura

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

The poem moves along like a song and is just a wonderful piece of poetry.

George

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

I will be there on Sunday having Easter dinner at my friends, so I will think of this wonderfully written piece when I go for my beach walk after dinner...Happy Easter...e

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

Oh, Anna. If I thought it would help, I'd drive about seven miles, as the crow flies, to our Pacific coast to fill a Mason jar with some Southern California sand and Pacific water along with some of our seventy-seven degree air and send it to you. But, alas, I doubt it would help you feel better. Poor lady. Well, I guess you've just another month or so till things warm up enough for a trip to your beloved shore.
Mark

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

~Annabel~
A "gem" so vivid and beautiful.

Lady Mary Ann ~God bless you well~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

Spring is in the air and that time will come very soon. Until then, defeat that pneumonia like I have and everything will be better and brighter.

Ron

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

Wow this is one of your best. You sustain it throughout and the phrases are so apt for the sea. Great

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

so , so visually and vividly perfect..bravo

magnum opus

budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 28, 2013

This is adorable, Anna, just adorable. The rhyming was above excellent, it was superb. The scenes you described put me right there beside you. This is a damn good poem.