This is not a "usual" Christmas write for me. Check out "I've Lost Christmas," that is more along my frame of mind at this time of year. I thought I would try something different. The format (rhyming acrostic) is very restrictive and thus will probably seem "forced." Best wishes to each one of you. (Jt'aJ)
Merry Christmas (rhyming acrostic)
May your hearts be full of joy Everyone each girl each boy Remember this time of year Reach out to all far and near Your soul will be filled with mirth
Christ the Lord has come to Earth Hear the angels sing with might Repel darkness bring on light In a blaze of Heaven’s glory Such a never ending story Thoughts of darkness are no more May all spirits rise and soar All peoples as one rejoice So peace at last is the choice
Regis, Even though the celebrated day has past, Christmas is for me a daily remembrance of our precious Lord and Savior. You have penned a lovely acrostic, most appropriate for the time of year. I apologize for being late in responding, but I'm still combing through my backlog after a much needed 11 day Caribbean cruise holiday.
I trust your Christmas was wonderful. Here's wishing you and yours a blessed and safe New Year. May you continue to write poems long into the future. Thank you for visiting my site. Your support is precious.
Wow! Reg~ This is Super Good!
Acrostic huh, I will have to look this up alittle more... never heard of it~
but, I like the flowwwww in this Reg.
A Keeper! Off to the VAult it goesssss!
I Hope within your Holidays, you will find a miracle!
Happy!!!!!!!!! New YEAR too~ Sweet Reg.
WArmest Blessings and Joy!
WArm HuGs,Sheeexoox
Slam dunk! Once again it is proven that artistic limitations in the
hands of a talented and dedicated artist such as yourself
actually expand the boundaries that technically erect fences
incapable of being moved. And a very merry Christmas to YOU.
H a p p y . N e w . Y e a r !!! 'Pea' <3
To write an acrostic is always a challenge. But to write one that has a rhythmic rhyme to it, is twice the challenge. You really did well with this. The rhythm and message are great. Keep up the great work...
What awesome rhyming acrostic and even greater He is the true redeemer. and he has come to earth You have shown your spiritual Soul in this beautiful Christmas poem.
Wishing you Love Peace & Joy To You And Your Family,
Merry Christmas...Morning Star
Very heartfelt in its content, Regis. An uplifting and optimistic write for the season...enjoyed it immensely. Thanks. May you have a wonderful Holiday season...a happy Winter Solstice...
Reg, your acrostic is fantastic!! I usually read down the other reviews, too, but there are so many here I came straight to my review. Not forced at all, just beautiful! A wonderful Christmas to you and yours, and may all hearts rejoice in this season.
It didn't seem forced at all, Regis and you did an excellent job at telling the story, even in this confined format. Merry Christmas and the happiest of New Years to you.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Latasha Willis (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2006
I like it! I wrote something like this years ago using the name of someone who passed away. Now I know it was an acrostic. Thanks for the lesson. :-)
Don't seem at all forced to me, Regis. You have written most flowingly within the self-imposed framework and made each and every line meaningful and well-blended. I've found Christmas in your write, and hope that, in the middle of all the potential for melee and confusion at this time of year, you find also your Bethlehem Star, your Peace and equilibrium. May love and hope abound with you and yours. LOL K xx
This is a spirited psalm to the the many assets of the Holiday Season and far from sounding forced it sounds like it truly comes from your heart. Merry Christmas and hopes for lots of big things in 2007.
Wonderful as always my friend. This is a message that the world needs more than any other...Much love to you and yours during this most blessed holiday...Michelle
A wonderful Christmas acrostic and doesn't seem forced to me at all. Great seasonal write.
May the joy that Christmas brings reside in your heart all through the coming year.
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A profound Christmas message. Nicely penned:) Sheila
peace
and hope you and yours was wonderful
..Regis ... this is a lovely acrostic. Light and easy, not this least bit forced.
..may your New Year be filled with joy.
...jeanne...
Merry Christmas
wishing you and Family a Happy New Year
Peace be with you
William
Happy Holidays!
Carolyn
I trust your Christmas was wonderful. Here's wishing you and yours a blessed and safe New Year. May you continue to write poems long into the future. Thank you for visiting my site. Your support is precious.
God bless
Lena
Helen :)
And A Happy New Year to you!
Gina
either way, ty for this and happy holidays to you too :)
Acrostic huh, I will have to look this up alittle more... never heard of it~
but, I like the flowwwww in this Reg.
A Keeper! Off to the VAult it goesssss!
I Hope within your Holidays, you will find a miracle!
Happy!!!!!!!!! New YEAR too~ Sweet Reg.
WArmest Blessings and Joy!
WArm HuGs,Sheeexoox
hands of a talented and dedicated artist such as yourself
actually expand the boundaries that technically erect fences
incapable of being moved. And a very merry Christmas to YOU.
H a p p y . N e w . Y e a r !!! 'Pea' <3
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
You are so creative!!!!! This arcostic poem is well-structured and rhymes so well!!!!! I truly enjoyed this!!!!!
Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones!!!!!
Lots of love,
Sandie May Angel, and Rosalynd XXXXX
Sam
Power poetic and spirit filled rendering of love.
Spiritual love and hugs to you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Something to strive for!
I wish I had the talent to do this.
Beautiful message from your talented pen.
Merry Christmas to you, Regis.
~Linda
Christmas Blessings...
Trapper
Happy Holidays
D
Joyful holidays to you and yours,
Aberjhani
May you have a joyous and safe Christmas!
Myrna
Ted
Wishing you Love Peace & Joy To You And Your Family,
Merry Christmas...Morning Star
N ot forced!
O penly beneficent!
E mmanuel exalted!
L ove permeates!
Feliz Navidad! tom.
peace and love, Carole
Warmest love to you and your family!!
Love Always TinkaSweets
Peace. Joyce
Love,
Taylor xo
Take care,
Sherry
RM Green
And a Joyous Holiday to you also!
simonb3
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Susan
A very Merry Christmas to you Reg...
Love and peace..... Art Sun...
Merry Christmas Regis
Chrissy
God Bless
Michelle~
Rebecca
Rose
Carmen
Excellently written!
Wishing you innumerable blessings this Holiday Season, and always...
Thank you,
Sheila
Love,
Sage
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Robert
Fee
I really like it and the thought of PEACE warms my heart.
ann
Not forced at all, just beautiful poetry. Deep; meaningful; thought provoking; and very well penned. Thank you, my friend.
(((HUGS))) and love, and MERRY CHRISTMAS, Karla.
God Bless,
Lew
In friendship and fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
May the joy that Christmas brings reside in your heart all through the coming year.
Very Merry Christmas to you and yours, Reg!
Micke
Gods Speed,
Michael
Paul;-)