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Alice in Wonderland (Rhyming Acrostic)
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Written for a poetry challenge; rhyming acrostics are very limiting and I find them difficult to write.

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Alice in Wonderland         (Rhyming Acrostic)
 
Alice, dear Alice in your land of wonder;
Listen, can you hear a voice like thunder?
Is it the Jabberwock or the Mad Hatter;
Could it be the Knave of Hearts, for that matter?
Everyone in your world can alter their voice.
 
In your magical realm everyone has a choice.
Now that these visions have set the scene,
 
Will you please tell me all that you’ve seen?
Oh how I am wishing to be with you there;
Nothing would stop me from meeting the March Hare.
Down in that extraordinary rabbit hole,
Everyone is eager to take a thrilling stroll;
Reality fades and fantasy flourishes.
Ladies and gentlemen you may make your wishes.
Alice will be our most gracious guide;
No one must stray away from her side.
Do not let common sense be swayed by your pride.
 
 
 
© Copyright 2010    Regis Auffray

 

 

 

  

     
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 Reviews of "Alice in Wonderland (Rhyming Acrostic)"
Reviewed by Alan Cook
Reviewed on March 26, 2022
Right on! A difficult job well done. Everyone wishes they had a rabbit hole they could jump into at times.
Reviewed by Stephen Pollard
Reviewed on December 23, 2019
Only a very talented writer can write rhyming acrostic poetry as well as Regis Auffray....An excellent written piece of work....
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 3, 2016
You wrote exceptionally well . I think you can write any type of poetry that you want too.....M
Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on August 14, 2014
Ah, Alice in Wonderland, rhyming with wisdom you did it, and I think there's an Alice in all of us ladies, especially stated for myself. Glad I could read this poem, only wish I'd read it much earlier in time. I think it will be a great comfort to me in the future for good reading.
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
Reviewed on October 4, 2012
I love it! I have always identified with Alice.

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on June 11, 2010
Regis,
Not only is your acrostic rhyming, but it gives an insight into some of the characters of Alice in Wonderland. Extraordinary!

God bless you,
Kathy
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on May 27, 2010
I love doing this type of structured work. This poem is exceptonal well done.
hug
Kathy
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on May 11, 2010
I am terrible with 'form' poetry, but you managed to tell a story taken from the classic, beautifully with this Acrostic. Well done, Reg! ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
What fun! :D
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
Amusing exercise, you enjoy having fun when you write Regis.

Axilea
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Reviewed on April 5, 2010
Passionately touching
Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on April 4, 2010
A very nice write. You do have a way with words. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on April 4, 2010
Excellent!
Becca
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 1, 2010
Regis....no poem is difficult for you to write my friend cause you write from the heart and you write with much passion and vision...fantastic write yet again my friend...cheers!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 1, 2010
Awh, fantasy take me away. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 1, 2010
INDEED, A RHYMING ACROSTIC IS NOT EASY, BUT YOU HAVE DONE A VERY GOOD JOB. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS, LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on April 1, 2010
Very cleverly written. I enjoyed the read .... it brought a smile to my face.

Donna
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 31, 2010
Regis,
This is a difficult style, but you made it look easy. I'm not a big fan of Alice, but I enjoyed this read. It's cute...Snugglebunny:)
Sheila
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on March 31, 2010
Regis, This is an excellent Rhyming Acrostic! Love Alice in Wonderland! Very well done my friend. HUGS,~ Chessly
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on March 31, 2010
loved it.....especially... Do not let common sense be swayed by your pride...some people are very proud dear Regis...what to do ?
the write is verrrrry veeery nice... good wishes :-)

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
To write an acrostic using the title 'Alice in Wonderland' that is about Alice in Wonderland seems an uneasy task, and you have managed to do a fine job with it. Flow seems good to me. I enjoyed the read. This is a good poem though I would not say it is one of your greatest.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
Wonderful work Regis. Much enjoyed. Your work is always so unique.
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
Quite clever, Mr. Auffray, Quite clever.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
That was quite cool, Reg...Ed
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 29, 2010
Almost broke into a little Men at Work for a moment, and then remembered that the Mad Hatter was the result of mercury used during hat-making.

Ron
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on March 29, 2010
Darling Regis!!!
You have penned a wonderful Rhyming Acrostic!!
Very Nicely Done!! I Love The Story Line of course
& also the dancing rhytym as I read it too!
I still like that babbling brook poem best that you
did a few years back
...about the flatlands for some Indiana Woman :)
All My Love Always
Love & Hugzz XO Vickie
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 29, 2010
Goodness, Regis... ANY rhyming acrostic is difficult but one of THIS extraordinary length and complexity of subject matter might be thought near impossible to accomplish with any degree of continuity and success... Very well done! YOU DID IT! This reads perfectly relaxed and complete and remains true to the beguiling nature and dialogue of the original. Impressive! :)) xx
Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on March 29, 2010
Excellent Regis! Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift, and for reminding me of Alice in wonderland much appreciated! May the Lord bless you in a very special way!



Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 28, 2010
well done, you captured the essence of this tale nicely
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on March 28, 2010
Oh Reg, you did great! I have only written one acrostic poem. It was one where I was mad at Alan (yrs ago), no one ever noticed as I did not point it out. Hee hee!!! Love & Peace to you! x
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
Good penning Regis, a fun read this is.

Best wishes
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
This is really beautiful Reg, and you actually made me smile while I read this. I don't know if I would like to fight the Queen of Hearts though, but an adventure in a wonderland would seem to be great. I wonder though. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
good one Reg, however those without common sense, do not have to worry about it straying. cheers to your fears
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
Splendid writing, Regis, almost like a fable...well done

Carole~
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
This writing is well written, and I like the effects. I am not knowledgeable about poetry types, and I have never read "Alice In Wonderland", but this writing makes me want to. Thanks to you, Regis.
Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
I'm impressed Reg, well done!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
You are brilliant Regis...Your wording is
the wonderland....
Ron
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
Regis,This is executed perfectly, a fun, fun read
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
And Tin-Man wishes not to get rusted...
If this one was difficult to write, you have showed us that DIFFICULTY is missing in your thesaurus.

Georg

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
It certainly does look like it is very difficult to write. But you nailed this one perfectly. Great job.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Damn, you certainly rose to the challenge. Yes those are difficult. A plus!!!!
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
APPLAUSE!!!

You did an awesome job here Reg. It is also timely, considering the movie just coming out. I think Alice would find your addition quite a tribute.

Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
i think this is awesome!
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Wonderful Regis, you got this down pat.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Regis, your poems are always so much fun to read, and always have a good message in it. I love your work!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
I am very impressed, this is just glorious!
Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Nicely done. I also love the old picture...remember that from when I was a child...all those millenia ago.
Always the best to you, Reg,
Jim
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Well you may not like them much but you certainly nailed this one. Well done Reg.
fee
Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Well done, Regis...gotta love Alice!!!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Excellent, Regis.
Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
I feel you're evolving..to an even better writer and that's some trick to do,
steve
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Nice job, Regis; well done, mon ami!

(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Reg,

Everyone has to live in a fantasy sometimes. I'm sure we all wish we could be Alice. Wonderful write.

Mary
Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
My goodness Regis,
You are so darn talented! Bravo mon cher ami! I really like the poem. You will in no doubt win this poetry challenge.
Nicole
Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Regis, difficult to write, yes, and you wrote it excellently. "Alice..." is a fun read, making it 'appear' to have been easily written--the sign of a skilled poet! ~leslie
Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Well done! A thrill to read. Couldn't have guessed from this, that you find it hard to write in this particular style.
Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Awesome job Regis.

ann
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
i love this capture of Alice's Wonderland :-) Yes it would be fun to take a trip :-)
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 26, 2010
Nicely done
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