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Nonchalance!
by Paul Berube → (All Poetry by Paul Berube)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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I often sit and wonder,
aren't we all a little daft?
Then slowly start to ponder
and exhale a hearty laugh.


So much is placed before us
how can one absorb it all?
If your pot were to be empty
would the apple cart dare fall?


We may teeter some or stumble
but I doubt we'd even care
when the waiter brought the menu
if he called it bill of fare.


There are those indeed who try
to go against the grain,
when all their marbles are strung out
they're really all the same.


Do words fit to your expression,
is manner whom your are ;
Or is every verse just like the first
lost on Planet Mars?


If the owl wasn't wise,
do you think he'd give a hoot ?
When a hunter's on safari,
don't he bring his gun to shoot?


Yes, some are lost within themselves,
while others seem to have it all
but it really doesn't matter
when your back's against the wall.


Just observe those all around you,
don't think they give a damn,
if all you had for breakfast
was plain old toast and jam.


Some may try to prove me wrong
with their hands upon their hips.
Until they do I'll sing this song
while strumming on my lips.


It's my pleasure just to know you
 don't think me such a loon,
that once a month, when after dark,
I bark, when I see the moon.



 



 
 


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 Reviews of "Nonchalance!"
Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Clever rhymes. This poem made me smile. The deeper meaning came through, that we're all alike basically. You might try meter: marking the emphasis of your lines with a '. And a _ when there's no accent on that word. See if you think it's a little sing-song, or if you like it that way. Hey, Paul, thanks for your message about Cattle Drives. Me and my partner are gem dealers; that's why I liked your Rose poem. We go to Rock and Gem shows all over Montana, as dealers or customers. This is how we replenish our merchandise for the little rock shop we run here in rural Montana. Skunks? I should stay away from you, then. How cool, to grow roses. commercially? Blessings for you too.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
Comedy & observation combined work well in this poem. A light-hearted feel with a real message for the deep thinkers. I enjoyed this! Sheila~

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on September 28, 2007
Bark, howl, same difference. I do that too! Great poem. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 24, 2007
I have to agree with Sheee. Love and Hugggssss,
Ann

Reviewed on September 23, 2007
Actions speak louder than Words!
Creative we must be, in any form it must and will appear!
I truly love this honest poem Paul!
Thank you for sharing your O P E N heart!
Much love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
as we howl at the moon!

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on September 18, 2007
Excellent I love the way this flows and the last two
Stanzas "that once a month, when after dark,
I bark, when I see the moon
Once a Mont in a full-moon
Not only do we women bark we often turn into a wolf lol
in all seriousness I love each stanza as I read between each line
it brings many instances we go through life
great words of wisdom
Beautifully written and conveyed!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star


Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
LOLOL
woof woof
lol
takes all types!
well well done!
here's a golden biscuit!
loved it lol

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
I enjoyed this piece and I really love the last two lines

"that once a month, when after dark,
I bark, when I see the moon."

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
I bark at every phase, Paul...as loud as I can! This was such a pleasure to read.
~Taylor

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
"... Aren't we all a little daft ... exhale a hearty laugh..."
Absolutely!
Take life seriously? Only when necessary.
Kathy

Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Thanks for dropping by my AuthorsDen poetry category, understanding childhood dreams and giving me a much better grade than "F". I'm fairly new to the site but look forward to reading your work. The poem above says very clearly that we're all a little different -AND-- that's okay!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
What a wonderful flow you have with words Paul, I'll be looking forward to reading more. Rose

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
I love the way this flows, Paul. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor (meaningful). Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
"Yes, some are lost within themselves,
while others seem to have it all
but it really doesn't matter
when your back's against the wall."

So true. I love the way you built this wonderful poem around some of our most overused expressions. Written in a fun and nonchalant way, but I find a wealth of thought and care given to each verse. Love it! Elizabeth

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 20, 2007
hmmmm... just once a month? ;-)
what a wonderfully sage write, paul! savored every line.
peace and blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
Paul, you've written a wonderful poem that gives every reason for the need to apply nonchalance. I think we all have to be a little daft to avoid asorbing so much, and that might have a great deal to do with many folks becoming lost within themselves. We are bombarded daily with so much stimulus in our environment, we have to choose and pick what we will accept or reject. Thus, the key to an humble spirit and good health is "Nonchalance".

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
Yes, some are lost within themselves,
while others seem to have it all
but it really doesn't matter
when your back's against the wall...

It's my pleasure just to know you
don't think me such a loon,
that once a month, when after dark,
I bark, when I see the moon.

I totally love this, Paul. Such sound and life-loving words of affirmation and acceptance. I love the words by a young English poet (whose name sadly escapes me for now) who says: "Oh, allow to exist the ledge for a vase of flowers... Oh you'd better relax... you're tied to the universe by the slenderest of chances... Make allowances... allow ME!" (Probably quoted wrong from memory, but you get the drift!) You're a man of 24 carat soul, Paul. Thank you, Kate xx


Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on August 12, 2007
I so agree with Kimmy, the title belies the poem. You have given alot of your heart and soul in this poem, Paul, and it leaves the reader thinking. and Like Kimmy I too love the verse...

"Do words fit to your expression,
is manner whom your are ;
Or is every verse just like the first
lost on Planet Mars?"

No truer words can be spoken in the written word. Do our words fit how we feel? Sometimes. Is our manner of how we present our writings, who we are? Sometimes. And most times our verses get lost on the plains of Mars.

There is a lot of emotional content here, Paul, and this is a very heartfelt write. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world,peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little den sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
"Do words fit to your expression,
is manner whom your are ;
Or is every verse just like the first
lost on Planet Mars?"
(I love this verse)

I don't think this "Nonchalance" is so nonchalant at all...much thought and wisdom here...even if your barking! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
very cute and some what true to life I think. Lady J

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
lol......I catch tantrums once in a while....Ugly to see I swaer!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
Excellent write. I like to bark once in awhile

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
I do feel like a loon in a toon at times
Excellent play with your words...
To be myself is all i want to be..
Be safe..

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
There is a lot of trueism and wit in this poem Great write Paul!........M

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
We are what we are, all God's creatures fashioned together in many different ways. Personally, I love the variety, God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
a well written poem filled with shards of truth!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
I don't think you are a loon!!! Howl all you want, I love the full moon's affect on people's souls...Very nice poetry, Paul, thank you for sharing....

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
Freedom still raining down- Even with offerings with a frown {free write of enjoyment} -The good love * Ted


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