Veils Of Autumn (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 1, 2008

Paul,
I come across so few nature pieces this deeply written. All the while, you kept the rhyme and rhythm. Fantastic! Love and Hugs~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

This was so lovely! Excellent to read this morning,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

This is superb write from you ....great piece of work from you...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Paul,
Your poetry is always very soothing to the soul, this is gorgeous!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Very delicate and moving presentation. Nice poem Paul. Bill

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

wonderful picture you paint here!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Paul this has to be the most perfect piece I've read in a long time...astounding imagery...truthful haunting words...SHEER EXCELLANCE!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

OH MY GOD !!! I LOVE YOUR WRITINGS!!!!

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Wow! I was struck by the very first line -

"Nature removes its' tourniquet of life.."

A wonderful painting beautifully portraying the simple delights of nature :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Glad I stopped by. These images....I do so like! these feelings...I felt. ~applause -Teresa

"Time has come to reap what was sown
Treasures of wonder expressed with a sigh"

especially loved this.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Beautiful, my friend.
Vivid imagery...
Outstanding!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

I love this, Paul. Beautiful imagery and the rhyme and flow are excellent. Like Dani, I'm a little fussy about rhyme.
Chrissie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Loved every word of this Paul....Your rhyme is divine....and I'm fussy....lol!!

Again very special my friend.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

I love the autumn!!!
The cool wind...the colors!!!
the imbalance of warm and cold.....its a delightful chaos!!!
ty for this!

Anita
:)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Good Morning, Paul
Wonderful picture you write so extremely well.

ty
tony

Reviewed by Cristina Van Dyck

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Simply Beautiful.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Paul,,Nature just can't be beat! Truly wonderful picture you paint here. Makes me look forward again to the colors of autumn,,Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Beautiful showing of the seasons and their connections.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

akes me wish I was up north... Brilliantly written!
Squirrels gather acorns to feast
Scamper to hide their miniature treats
Larger animals thicken of fleece
Search to find winter retreats

In veils of autumn a respite exist
Energies dormant but only of view
Caches nourished while living desist
Slowly absorbing strengths to renew

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

A poem of harvest and renewal. Very nice indeed, Paul!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$