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Dawn Of Time
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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At the dawn of time

Music did not soothe

The breast

Of the savage beast

But the Satisfaction

Of hunger pangs.

~*~

 

There were no Time schedules

As time is know today

For their clocks were set

With every beat of their hearts.

~*~

 

No song ever soothe

The savage breast

But the heart’s rhythm

Of the dying prey

It held within its teeth

As the beast

Struggle to compose itself.

~*~

 

No melody ever soothe

The savage breast

But the sound of every lick

The beast rendered

As she stimulated her new born

Upon the sunrise

Of the Dawn of time.

~*~

 

 

By: William Bonilla

“D’Artagnan”

01/24/09

 


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 Reviews of "Dawn Of Time"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
A LOOK AT 'LIFE' BEFORE TIME FROM A DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE...THE IMAGERY IS GREAT...DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Wow William. An excellent poem. Itreally captures that period of time in earth's history......M

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 27, 2009
This is an outstanding, brilliant piece.
Beautiful work.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 26, 2009
Beautiful, very beautiful!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 26, 2009
You have written this with so much insight.

Reviewed on January 25, 2009
very interesting verse William, made me think about the beast and the feast, not to mention the breast

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
This writing certainly brought out the truth... there is a beast out there, and yet... really nice writing William. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
oh to soothe the savage beast--or breast! LOVE THESE LINES: There were no Time schedules

As time is know today

For their clocks were set

With every beat of their hearts.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
The beast of this world cannot be soothed .that's for sure!
Excellent William!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
You've got me thinking, William; in some ways, the beast is still out there preying. Just look at the condition of our world. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
The cycle of life..the life of a day...very good William!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Captivating write indeed that lets the mind go back into a different state of being.

fee

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
An excellent poem William, well written...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed on January 25, 2009
The beast rendered
As she stimulated her new born
Upon the sunrise
Of the Dawn of time

This last stanza says it all. Nice poem with gentle flow and a music woven within the very fabric of its own beauty

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Very melodic, if that's even a word. Lovely write!
Becca~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
And you took us there with your poem, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Thank you William for sharing your words as we all fight to tame the beast that lives within so that life can be beautiful and caring for the new born.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Very creative and reflective write, William. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
enjoyed reading, William ... good substance to reflect upon ...

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Written with insight for the future. The beast lives and many are victim

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Wxcellent well written piece William!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Always you will give us, suddenly, one of those philosophical thoughts that is what separate us from the "savage breast"

Georg

PS. I wonder, lions in the Paradise, were them vegetarians?

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
An excellent and well written poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Beautiful write William, I think theres a Savage beast in all of us but I think most have learned to control it ...well I think some do...OH my what a great write. Love and hug Bonnie


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