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A Silent Raven
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On a Gloomy gray

Cloudy winter day

Parked in a lot

In a mountain center

I stare towards the woods

At its brownish

Dry leafless residents

With their blah existence

Ruining my day’s vision

Along with piles of dirty snow

From the plows clearing

the lot.

 

 

On a salt splattered

Road side guard railing

I see a silky shinning ebony

Raven

Perched silently

Adoring the dismal scene

Of a cold gloomy winter day.

 

 

By: William Bonilla

"D'Artagnan"

01/28/09

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A Silent Raven"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 4, 2009
Great visuals in the wintery poem........M

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 30, 2009
The images in this poem really pop. Maybe because I saw 2 crows land on a snow-ladden car roof when I got to work the other day. Quite the contrast in color - so vivid. Great work on this poem:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 29, 2009
William a raven is also a messengers of the spirit world
So yes I think Amber is correct
But also a raven is
Peace Love and Light...Yolie

RAVEN: Ravens symbolize magic, inner fears, the spirit world, and a change in consciousness, healing, dispelling "dis-ease," the unknown, mischievousness, adaptability, intelligence, ingenuity, death, war, bloodshed, battle, divination and the destruction required for creation. They are the messengers of the spirit world. They are connected to the Crone, the Sun, and to Odhinn, Apollo, Athene, Cronus, Asclepias, Brahma, Morrigan, Babd, Nantosuelta and Lugh. Raven's Wisdom Includes: Rebirth without fear Ability to tear down what needs to be rebuilt Renewal Ability to find light in darkness Courage of self-reflection Introspection Comfort with self Honoring ancestors Connection to the Crone Divination Change in consciousness

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 29, 2009
I feel the mood in this.... well done William.
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 29, 2009
Among the dismal winter landscape, nature showed you a spot of beauty in a raven...beautiful writing, William
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
Love the imagery.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
nice, real and simple-i like it!

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
William, I enjoyed your version of "your" Raven Totem... and I do agree with Amber as I have been researching the Raven coincidently...at my Bible class last week...I got a more positive version of the Raven.. We can learn so much on this site... thank you William, and those below... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
I find this not to be depressing, as some may think, in fact I find it a beautiful artistic picture in poetry of bird of majesty, not unlike the eagle as all birds are beautiful...Ed

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
William, Perhaps The Raven is your animal totem. Here is what a raven totem is:
hugs and peace and love,
Amber "V"

Raven as a Totem

Raven is a special totem. They are all special, of course, but Raven holds a unique place among totems. He is considered by many to be the creator, and sometimes saviour, of man. According to legend, he made mankind, he brought them salmon to eat, he stole fire from the sun so mankind wouldn't freeze, he brought them water to drink during a drought, and he taught man to enjoy life. Raven is a cultural hero - a creator... and a trickster.

Raven's mischief is legendary among the native tribes of the northwest. He is always playing tricks, changing shape, and never quite who or what or where you expect him to be.

With such a complicated, shifting totem, it's not surprising that different people have different interpretations of Raven's personality and gifts. Still, several main themes come up when you look at Raven. Here are a few of the main aspects of this complex totem.

The Creator Aspect
Raven is seen as giving life. He is primarily a helping, nurturing spirit. There is also a certain amount of self-sacrifice in his actions. He does what he does to ensure the happiness of others.

The Trickster Aspect
Raven is associated with joy and laughter. He is known to play tricks, but they are usually beneficial ones, teaching people to laugh at their own follies.

The Great Magician
Raven is seen as a shape-changer. He has the power to alter form, and to bring great changes in people's lives. He can also see through false forms, lies, and the tricks of others.

The Seeker of Secrets
Raven has a great sense of curiosity. He is a gatherer of information, and a sharer of secrets. The search for the Truth is predominant.

The Juxtaposition of Opposites
Raven is a contradiction. He is both black and white, joy and sorrow, saviour and nemesis. He is about both knowledge and secrets. He can be, and not-be.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
Oh I love this and I adore Ravens~except when they get in my trash:)

Reviewed on January 28, 2009
Wonderful write, William; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
William, you have to watch the quiet ones... great write.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
Excellent description; the inclusion of the Raven adds aa cold reality. R

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 28, 2009
This is powerfully penned, William - cold gloomy days to some are a paradise to others: much thought in these lines.

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
A raven contemplating a gloomy and dismay scene, oh boy! when you get the blues you get the blues! even your words came in the same hue.
But yes, I concur, and excellent poem.
Now a Coors or two and your engine will start going.

Georg


Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
Fabulous description of the wintery days!

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 28, 2009
You write such vivid lovely writes William and this is one of many. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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