All around me
Are multicolored flowers
Red, white, yellow, pink
And beautiful roses of all kinds
Adorned with the heavenly
Fragrance of immortal joy
Maybe with their beauty
They seek to steal my heart
Maybe with their aroma
They seek to wash my soul
And if I can reside
Amongst the flowers evermore
Singing the grandeur
Of love with the soaring birds
And glimpse the majestic scene
Of bees kissing the flowers
And hear the silent moan
Of the flowers orgasm
Tell me my lord,
What better pleasure could I ever wish?
Could another place
More peaceful than the garden exist,
Where swirls the flower with the breeze,
Spreading the pollen of dreams?
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Again, oh again and ever anon,
you ALWAYS keep your verses simple and appealing in their immediacy!
Gorgeous! And ALSO the picture, which I assume is your work, eh?
Very poetic moving piece. For every once of ugliness there is an once of beauty. All around us we can choose to seek out the beauty or let the ugliness dominate our vision. tkG
Bhuwan, this is just so light it flies! Flows like silk through the lips. Beautifully written. Lisa
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
How lovely is this! This one floats off the page. Beautiful images!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Beautiful rendering; beautiful imagery. In short, a beautiful write!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
"More peaceful than the garden exist,
Where swirls the flower with the breeze,
Spreading the pollen of dreams?"
I love the art you chose
excellent write.
Taylor
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Oh {{Bhuwan}} I am getting ready to sleep now and the picutre of your words will frame my dreams this is so beautiful Dear Poet friend I miss you
so much.... Love n Luck Always
lady peg
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you ALWAYS keep your verses simple and appealing in their immediacy!
Gorgeous! And ALSO the picture, which I assume is your work, eh?
Cheers,
Richard Vallance
This is such a graceful write! Your words lift it right off the page. Thanks for this beauty, my friend!
Tami
Nancy
Bobbi
~Joseph
All the best Sage
Love Tinka
*Marlene*
Where swirls the flower with the breeze,
Spreading the pollen of dreams?"
I love the art you chose
excellent write.
Taylor
so much.... Love n Luck Always
lady peg