Although this sounds silly to me now, green IS my 'bad luck' color (just in case you're wondering--purple and gold are my 'good luck' colors). Everytime I wore a green dress, especially this UGLY flowered one, it not only rained but flooded our plat! No kidding! I had superstitious relatives who also lived in the plat who all begged me NOT to wear green :)!
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Ma called me a jinx!
True, my luck was bad--
but it was all I had.
Whenever I wore green
everything turned sad.
Cascades of rain poured
water inside roared
then houses wore boards.
Green on me was wrong—made my ankles ‘sprang’.
Everybody knew I flooded, refrained:
”Don’t wear your green dress! We don’t need the rain!”
Helping my mom out
glasses disappeared--
all people wore a beard!
I could not see straight--
faces blurred, eyes teared.
Knew we’d need a boat
though some swam, can’t float …
outside was a moat.
Green on me was wrong—made my ankles ‘sprang’.
Everybody knew I flooded, refrained:
”Don’t wear your green dress! We don’t need the rain!”
Word got around town
that I had worn green.
Folks were ‘up in arms’
angry … getting mean.
So I changed, wore pink …
let flood waters sink.
Folks – superstitious—stink!
Green on me was wrong—made my ankles ‘sprang’.
Everybody knew I flooded, refrained:
”Don’t wear your green dress! We don’t need the rain!”
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Reviews of "Don't Wear Green (We Don't Need the Rain)"
Interesting but fun read; well done, Sandy! Enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
My favorite color: blue! :) I also love red and white!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2005
Wonderful Fun Poem. I have superstitions about thingslike that too. But I only get angry with myself.
Can you come here and wear green for me Please.(that's a begging there) I need that rain. You can stay all summer too. (c:)
Super poem w/ great message too.
Thanks Sandy
Tracey
Perfect rhyme and verse!! A delightfully humorous write of poetic greatness!!
Blessings,
Robert
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
My favorite color: blue! :) I also love red and white!
Can you come here and wear green for me Please.(that's a begging there) I need that rain. You can stay all summer too. (c:)
Super poem w/ great message too.
Thanks Sandy
Tracey