The Chronicles (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

The Chronicles
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley → (All Poetry by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley)
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I want both of us to start singing like two Traveling minstrels About this extraordinary existence We share ~Hafiz~

It was in a myriad of forms, many ages Life after life unto the beginning In which the split took place Afore we took our first breath The Chronicles of our life before life Afore the decision was made to learn When we looked into the mirror of life We were rendered in two The ancient one knows For He is the alpha and the omega Go forth and learn many lessons For each it will be difficult You will walk as new birth Before reaching the end Which becomes wisdom The music of the chronicles will remain The song within your souls Which are carried upon the gentle breeze Through the world As weary voyagers seeking Clad in light Worn as the aura That suspends us in time Skin shimmers in vibration When fingers touch The arc of electricity is seen Re-Membering who we are Wings wrapped as one Our wanderings in the Universe Has so made us wise Yet knowing that wisdom Is a gift not to be claimed The melding has begun Karmic lessons learned As it is so written Grace unfolds eternally Carolee Dennis-Woosley October 22, 2012

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 25, 2012

I hope this is true. It would be wonderful. I actually believe what you've written. Thank you, Carol. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on October 24, 2012

Set forth is the callling of twins to join once more, quickened in our time. Never to be seperated again. So it is said, so it will be.

Stay well and keep writtig
Eddy

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 23, 2012

All five senses..adding the sixth from your poem
*Carolee*
to be felt by heart and soul evolving evermore..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Fate plays throughout our lives and carries us through
bad times, good times and all the other times. Thank you,
Carol.

Deborah

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

What a fantastic poem Lilly, the quality of the mystical before time! All those unknowns. Glad you're back!

Mark

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

This has a mystical quality and I sense a bit of electric eroticism in the idea of a man and a woman uniting to created new birth. I also, in that last stanzaReminds me of the line from the song, After the Gold Rush, �� The loading had begun, taking mother silver seed to a new home in the sun.�

Ron

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

What a vision you have created. A time before time on earth. Through my research and studies you are speaking of a time in God's realm of the twin souls. Their birth and learning with the final destination of coming of one again. Well done!

Di

Reviewed by jude forese

an endearing, ethereal poem converging on our eternal origin sharing its journey ...

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

My dear lady Lily, so good to see you back. You write beauty in everything with deep meaning for us readers. Again my dear Lady Lily beautifully done.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Carole ~~
Beautifully penned for grace unfolds eternally.
Wings wrapped as one.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Teresa Walker

Eloquence of the soul with beauty entailed! Again, my friend your words of play are beauty undescribable...a birthing of words!

Eleh ha- Devarim..."these are the words"..Deuteronomy 1:1 the first four words meaning...We are being brought out my friend to be brought in...may our lives and words be eternally brought out!

Blessings enjoyed this very much!
Teresa

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Amazingly written poetry Laura

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Quite a captivating piece, Carolee.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Ah,mesmerizing lines take the reader through the concept of birth . . . even so all it takes is a simple touch for the wings to become as one, and as one they will wander the world and seek satisfaction where ere they are.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

beautiful visuals painted with your words to tell a tale of epic proportions
budd

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2012

The separation of the Twins,
The journey,
The finding of each other
The melding
Grace unfolds eternally

A beautiful poem of the Twins Carolee

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

This is mesmerizing!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)

Very spiritual poem Carolee from what seems to be finding your twin. A little deep for me, but much enjoyed.

Gail