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The Red Train
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Sunday, November 5, 2023    Rated "G" by the Author.
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a poem about a magical train


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From an aerial view, the sight of a beautiful red train
chugging along down the railway track
takes my breath away;
One moment I am watching a funnel shaped smoke stack sending puffs,
up towards the white cottony clouds then disappearing,
and the next I am hearing the sound of a whistling blowing.
A melodious voice is heard as a conductor enounces,
"tickets please,"
Out of my pocket I produce an admission ticket
that was long overdue ...
With one cotton white glove he presses the ticket
between his fingers then holds it up to his gold monocle and smiles ,
"welcome aboard then !"
He traipses over to supposedly important passengers that I cannot see
and leaves me sitting there, wondering about our destination.
How I got so lucky as to enter this magical snow train I have no idea,
but the scent of this leathery Kirlian man, still clings to my thoughts
like a revenant moment from a long forgotten past.
To Be Continued...



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 Reviews of "The Red Train"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 9, 2023
MYSTIC, WHAT A WONDERFUL OPENING...FOR MORE TO COME! AND MY THIRST IS DEFINITELY...SPIKED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on November 16, 2023
So beautiful and classic, Rose.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 6, 2023
What a delightful dream to be in! Even the conductor is attractive. I noticed that no snow cover the tracks and the engine has the appropriate cow catcher on the front so that any wild animal will be brushed aside as long as the train is not moving too fast.

The magic ride that will lead to Christmas?

Ron

Whatever happened to Thanksgiving! Everything I see on TV dissolve Christmas already.

Reviewed by Betty Jo Tucker
Reviewed on November 6, 2023
I can hardly wait for more, Mystic Rose!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 6, 2023
A beautiful painting, and a lovely bit of flash fiction. Very visual. Enjoyed. Hope you're well. r

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2023
Vie,
I loved this dream and I can absolutely picture this fantasy filled with delicate creativity..
Penned with great imagination..
Peace, D


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