Cloud’s lament ( A Tanka form)
I spread my robe wide
Cooling mountains and valleys
My breathe cold, ice sprays
Sweet love and warmth I share
Relief to all life form on earth
I crown the sky grey
Bring layers of rainbow shine
Pure my form white light
Kissing peaks, and drink by night
Dancing under sky I swirl
Mountain tops bounce wet
On her breasts my arms I spread
Celebrating love
Her lofty virgin grooves I fill
While she paces along,tall and strong
Hear the wind sing tunes
Thrilled leaves in jungles wide eyed
Suckle and fall sleep
Reckless droplets fall away
A fresh green bloom in offing
Wind harmlessly holds
Take rain away in her folds
Playing soft music
Drives me crazy till the end
And holds my reign, till I burst
Always,
Deborah
Love ya!
Jane
lovely, lyric work
well said '
never stop writing!!
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