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War's Holy Casualties
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Collaboration between Peter Paton & Amelia Amy Peterson

A joint perspective into the trials and tribulations of a serving American soldier in the Middle East

How do I live with the ghosts?
he wants to know
those innocent eyes
caught in the battle
the wails of mothers
of those wounded babies
and shattered soldiers
oh god, he says I don't know

I fight for America
and give countries freedom
from the tyranny of terror,
and the honor and glory
I thought justified
for the service I render
quickly disappears when
I see those eyes, inside my mind

Oh baby, oh baby our spirits are there
hugging you tight with a heart of love
holding you close encouraging tears
cry on our shoulders while no one is near
just we and you baby and all is forgiven
the glory our son, is you did your job
and casualties of war are torn bodies,
and the screams, and the blood
The honor our son, is within your heart
and when you come home
you'll understand a value of life

Remember baby, when it's all said and done
every soul serves its purpose
as it marches along
who crosses your path
had its own journey
and was placed, in perfect timing
with our creators knowing
that its purpose, was now done
Remove this burden from your heart
our baby, our soldier, our son
in mom and dad's eyes, you've done no wrong

Copyright by
Peter Paton & Amelia Amy Peterson 2004

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 Reviews of "War's Holy Casualties"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Good collaboration and great message. You two have said something that I feel could comfort many a soldier.

Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Peter,

This is one extra-fine colloboration - a most stunning & profound write - Bravo to you & Amelia!!

Robert

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
A wonderful collab. heart touching.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on October 3, 2004
This was a touching piece, a powerful write.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 3, 2004
Every mother's son, wife's husband, child's father - or mother... tragedy that is unique and personal for every family involved on whatever side the battle lines are drawn. Thank you for homing in on the true perspective of the horrors of war - even more so, perhaps, for those fighting for "others'" causes. Heartbreaking. And every soldier MUST believe in what he/she is fighting for, otherwise how can they "fight" with integrity? We have, perhaps, a "moral" duty to support them as individuals - even if we are more than a little sceptical about the cause. The choice to wage war has, after all, not been theirs... on the other hand, theirs was the decision to enlist in the first place: to defend rather than to attack would be my hunch. God bless each and every one of them.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 3, 2004
Oh my, Powerful stuff Peter!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
A powerful collaborative tribute. Well done. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Congratulations to you both, this is a wonderful piece. Thank you.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
A moving tribute.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Magnificent collaboration and tribute to all men and women in uniform who gallantly serve.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Not only is this great poetry, it is a great message! You two done extremely well!
Keep writing!

Lisa

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
what a powerful soul touching write you have shared with us here Peter....wonderful collaboration with Amy...profound...love n luck...BHUWAn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Superb collaboration from two very perceptive writers
with lots of wisdom! It stirs all the emotions and
brings awareness to the situation.Thank you for sharing!

Reviewed on October 1, 2004
(((peter))) (((amelia)))

heartwrenching, powerful emotive write--thank you for remembering the ultimate sacrifice our men and women in uniform are willing to take every day

*salute* to a fine collabortive write--BRAVO! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
A heart moving colloboration. Well done

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
I was as touched by this. As I was the Iraq lady thanking Mr Blair at the conference, for helping them on the road to freedom, and not to pull out.

Makes the Anglo American friendship and bravery all the more poignant.

I think you two sum it up with your own reviews..

Splendid....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Oh this touched deeply...most outstanding heartwrenching piece!!

Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
what a wonderful poem, you say it perfectly

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Amy...you are divine..and I am privileged to share this glorious piece with you..

Peter

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Oh Peter...misty eyes...it is glorious...thank you for your strength and confidence.

Amy

Reviewed on October 1, 2004
sad and heartshattering write; well done, amy and peter!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Nice joint venture. I have a friend who just returned from Iraq because of wounds received. I have not seen him, but have received a letter. He basically said that he is proud to be a part of what is happening over there and so are the vast majority of Americans who are currently serving. Moral is not low, as some news organizations would like us to believe. He said he is shocked at the slant of most of the news stories on the networks. I for one am not shocked at the networks... but I'll not bore you with that. This is a wonderful write.


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