Summer Breeze (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

I love this one....it is very peaceful. You are truly talented at writing poetry, and just writing in general! You are a true poet, unlike myself...I write novels intentionally, but the poetry comes from transmissions from outer space or something.

Reviewed by Valerie Boggess

Reviewed on July 8, 2006

Peter, beautiful write, so peaceful. A wonderful paradise indeed! God bless!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Summer breee is fine with me too. Peter, what a relaxed anfd beautiful write!!! I like this a lot!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Very peaceful prose...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Beautiful serene poetry!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

I s e e you !! Keep wigglin' your toes !! See the birds, too. Hear
them twittering and warbling. Feel the sun and am getting tipsy
on the smell of jasmine. T h a n k s, man!! Love and Laughter 'neath
a 200-year-old tree with roots that go on and on. . .and on. . .
'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Seems to me you found a piece of Eden, Peter. Good for you! Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

It does sound like a wondrous paradise, Peter - and a wonderful place to kick back, and ponder life, and write.

Much better than the dark depressing ogre's cave I've been forced to hide in lately - that evil queen is everywhere!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Keep making the best of every treasured day..
The perfect way to start the day...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

A fine rush of summer bliss indeed. Exquisite write.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

I'd love to be a child again and run through the sprinklers in your garden...laughing and feeling alive...even if my life changed tomorrow, I would have this memory today and recognize it's significance. The mention of the song was a sensory delight...
Bask a little longer in the sunshine, peter.
Love, Taylor ~

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Your images are outstanding and strong, Peter, and the only thing missing was the hammock. Very dreamy and relaxing poem. Nice job, friend!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Peter, you are an incredible poet! Of course the man is the poet;-)You make everything beautiful and your attitude is an example for all to copy!I love your inspired uplifting work!You make me feel so appreciative!Thank you!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

everything about this is wise and beautiful. the most meaningful part to me, on this day, at this moment , is 'and you have got to catch your dreams before they all slip away'. And so I shall.

Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Wow, amazing thoughts that transcend the images of life, but, you are right all is only on loan to us including our own simple lifes and sooner or later must be returned.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Great imagery there, Peter....wonderful work.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Only Romantically Inclined Great Write On...

Here In L A Cali-Scorn-Ya It Is Summer Greased Hot Breezed 105 Degreed...

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Calm and reflective is good - mind Fed-Exing some of that over to So-Cal? Life here is a crowded merry-go-round with squeaking bearings. Of course you would know that, having lived in LA!

Minnie Riperton - I haven't heard that song for twenty years. Do you know that woman had a four octave range? Incredible!

Love those moments you describe here, peace is a precious gift, especially peace of mind and spirit.

Richard

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Most relaxing! A wonderful poem,
B&R

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Peter,

Joyful, peaceful serenity in perfect verse...and I love that song by the Isley's. :) Thanks. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Wonderful thoughts in a mind that is at peace with God and its self.

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Oooooh Peter!

...the mesmerising dance of life is both brief and intense
and you have got to catch your dreams before they all slip away...

I think you were in the perfect place today for savouring the ones you have and you certainly created the idyllic picture for others to create a few of their own. Fabulous write!

:) A very chilled Panda

Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

This is exactly how I feel everyday when I go out and sit on my bench and watch the birds at the feeder and butterflys drifting about. It so renews the spirit to enjoy the beautiful fruits of labor that God's blessing has allowed me to produce. This was beautiful, Peter, thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Peter,
One can only inhale...the beauty and serenity of your poetry...and exhale, recognizing Life is so good....when the truth of our souls is anchored in the understanding...that every good and perfect gift, comes down from The Father of Lights!

Enjoy your truth and sun and freedom, Brother!

Love&prayers, Rhonda

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Way to relax. Way to understand why you are relaxing. way to realize that it can change in the blink of an eye. Way to be happy even knowing all that. This is the true meaning of . . . Chill Out.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

"Loving you is easy cause you're beautiful....."
beautiful and as easy as love should always be.
Susan

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

this is soooooooo relaxing, lazy (lol!), and grateful, Peter. such a nice write. Mary