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Ten Sins or Less
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Those lines, those lines. What to do about those lines.

The confessional lines wound
down the aisles and out the door
and unforgiven sins were growing
at a devilish rate. Fortunately a
Wal-Mart CEO, in for an
Emminent Domain...ah...irregularity
offered a quid pro quo......
and Father
I'll build you a lane for 'ten sins or less'.



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 Reviews of "Ten Sins or Less"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Lol...you are so funny....that wicked twist always catch me off guard!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
LOL
Walmart is the devil?
Didn't the do something like that on South Park, one of my kids told me, soemthing like that recently.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
HAHAh I know A Walmart Ceo this is good.Love the poem and humor.

Reviewed by Little Miss Aki (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
wow. I am obliged to receive such a compliment. You have some interesting (if not genius) work.

I am highly impressed, well done.
~Aki

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
LOL, this is hysterical, Rusty! WhatdoIget for ten sins or less?
Excellent write -- I love it!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Rusty - This one is so good (for a on-Catholic) it just encourages your growing number of fans... and you! My Daddy would brand you, "A Rascal ! ! ! "
- Bill

Reviewed on October 9, 2006
Great poem...great idea! Head 'em up, move 'em out!

Yo're poetry is invigorating...

Micke


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