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here and there
by Rusty Daily → (All Poetry by Rusty Daily)
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Sometimes I just don't know where I am.


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here and there are places,
that I use a lot.
one is a place I am,
the other, I am not

there can be pretty far,
or it can be close by.
and there can even disappear
when I go bye-bye

if I go for a walk
to the place called there,
how is it I end up
being here not there.

so I told my here to stay
when I left to go,
but lonely here showed up there
and why I do not know

I just can't understand why
a here will go to there,
but there always runs away
from here to over there.


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Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Rusty, this is a mind bender. Your word play is so articulate, it makes perfect sense. Great job.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Confusing is't it??

Sometimes my mind is here but my thoughts are there!!

Oh they go everywhere!!

Well done..you got there just fine!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
What a cute and delightful prose. "..I go for a walk to the place called there..." I can see the images and feel the meanings throughout. This would make a great picture story book for children. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Hi Rusty:

It was nice to find another poet who refuses to take life -- or poetry seriously.

Hank

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Tee hee! Cute! I'm always lost...I need a name tag and a guide dog most of the time. Good job Rusty! Michelle

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Most intriguing and playful.
Am making a note to NOT trvel with you - unless you have one of those gadgets which I can't operate. That er, ah, little black thing. GPS? Is that right?
- Another generation, - Bill

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
hahahhahahahaaaaaaaaaaa

You know..........there is alot of wisdom in this!!

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
What a delightful ditty, Rusty-friend. The play on words is such fun, both for children and grownups! Thank you for another glimpse into your playful side.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on October 10, 2006
Sometimes, too many signs in one's head can be pretty confusing to oneself.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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