Severe thunderstorms due in later today
and tonight. Pray for me???
...it's a time for renewal and rebirth...
with lightning spitting out of angry eyes the combatants gather in stormy skies they march in step to thunder's cadence call these combatants that arrive at nightfall
with angry shouts they issue a challenge against humankind, they'll have their revenge with screams of fury they attack the land with awesome weaponry at their command
wind, hail, lightning, tornadoes, heavy rain terrify as they strike, again, again there's no resistance so the storms move on there is nothing left, everything is gone
the battle through, rain washes the torn earth it's a time for renewal and rebirth a tiny green sprig is the start, then two life always returns after storms roll through
??Hello??!! Guess you can come out now, huh? We have crossed over into the brand new day and I sincerely trust that you have been kept spectacularly safe by the Supreme Hand that shielded and kept you as the apple of His eye and in the hollow of His palm until the specatacular storms had passed you by?! I'm rumbling on like the thunder, I know, but you can growl right back at him now that he is gone!! I know what it is to have fears too, Karla, but we grow stronger each time we confront and conquer them. I'm sure you've grown an extra inch or two overnight! Kate xx
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
Karla,
You have done a marvelous job, and this is a very descriptive write you have penned. I have been through, and have stayed with family in Spring, and as I’m sure you’re well aware, WOW! Stay safe and dry, as the gods replenish Mother Earth.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
praying Sweetie this is one awesome poem....
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
Well we need these to make things grow, and the humidity in Texas I refused to work at Dyess when ever air con broke.
Loved every night was a fab storm, and one could go out init as it was warm too, but the smell after was so refreshing.
This idiot swam in a swimming pool during one, yet I'm glad I did.
Wish I could have thought poetry then, cos you depict it so well, plus the flash floods.
Karla, There isn't but one that controls the storms..since I know that You trust Him...then hand Him your fears and he will handle them. You know you are never alone in His presence.
Yes I will pray for you, I will pray you have no fear.
You know this is a good write! He knows your fears. Lisa
This poem is so descriptive, and I do sympathize with your apprehension ok......FEAR over the storm....but think of it as an amazing energy, that you can witness......something that man cannot make or control.......and yet you can stay safe and sound in your man made home.........that work??? Guess not...we all have phobias....I will tell you mine......its really really stupid...but when I was alittle kid, i saw George Plimpton on TV, and he was doing a show about Holland, and how cars go into crash into the canals sometimes, and how the drivers are taught how to get out of a car underwater with the water rushing in......(they have to wait till the water is one inch from the inside roof, keeping their nose up there, then the water pressure is equal on the inside and outside and they can open the door and swim to the surface.......now I don't know why, but this has never NOT crossed my mind when driving over a bridge...wether its a rinky dink local bridge over a brook....or the George Washington Bridge over the Hudson River.........ok......enough about my weirdness lol...........
You write so well!!! Write tonight........and yeah you will be in my prayers and thoughts..........pax........Anita :)
On this fortieth day of Spring I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
This poem, "you can't keep a good man down" must be on the selected best list. This is a grand reading and a magnificent writing. It delivers the first line in golden letters, and the last ones in platinum!
This is spectacular writing! The word usage, the imagery, the flow, the rhythem...all of it ties together in one neat package! excellent job on this; enjoyed so much! you keep gettin' better and better; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
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God Bless
Michelle
Your friend in Arkansas.........Ronny
You have done a marvelous job, and this is a very descriptive write you have penned. I have been through, and have stayed with family in Spring, and as I’m sure you’re well aware, WOW! Stay safe and dry, as the gods replenish Mother Earth.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Loved every night was a fab storm, and one could go out init as it was warm too, but the smell after was so refreshing.
This idiot swam in a swimming pool during one, yet I'm glad I did.
Wish I could have thought poetry then, cos you depict it so well, plus the flash floods.
This is one thing we have no control over...
Reindeer
Blessings,
Joseph
our best, as you have done here.
Safe harbors, and hugs.
Yes I will pray for you, I will pray you have no fear.
You know this is a good write! He knows your fears. Lisa
You write so well!!! Write tonight........and yeah you will be in my prayers and thoughts..........pax........Anita :)
This poem, "you can't keep a good man down" must be on the selected best list. This is a grand reading and a magnificent writing. It delivers the first line in golden letters, and the last ones in platinum!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is spectacular writing! The word usage, the imagery, the flow, the rhythem...all of it ties together in one neat package! excellent job on this; enjoyed so much! you keep gettin' better and better; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
though you fear storms they are your muse;-)
You portray them with great creativity!