~~ Sandled feet walk amid the burgeoning clouds The breeze as He passes causes them to rise He's angry today, everyone will know it He will pass judgement from His throne in the skies
A lowly man is caught out in the open He is searching for shelter against the rain Darkening clouds part and God's finger points down The man becomes part of an electric chain
The wind screams out another name on the list Frantic cries of mercy give voice to the storm God thunders His verdict upon the poor soul Who is forced to surrender his living form
God reaches down and snatches up a city Everyone is affected by His wrath There's no need for warning, He already warned God comes in the storm, on a lightning bolt's path ~~ (C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
WOW!! This one blew me away; what a powerful poem that perfectly captures His ability to create stormy skies and the powers within! AWESOME imagery and setup; BRAVA, dear poet! You shine on these stormy writes; keep them coming!! You are getting better and better; your talent is amazing!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
Share
Print
Save
Follow
You should put up a warning for children
about reading this! I know I got a bad feeling!
Good poem in form though!
Powerful!!
Love Tinka
Great message here.
Nice one beaut...
awesome poem!Brava!
God BLess
Michelle~
Tommy
Gave me shivers, Karla. That's how I envision the end of this wicked world.
WOW!! This one blew me away; what a powerful poem that perfectly captures His ability to create stormy skies and the powers within! AWESOME imagery and setup; BRAVA, dear poet! You shine on these stormy writes; keep them coming!! You are getting better and better; your talent is amazing!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D