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Haiku: When Mama Ain't Happy...
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Bad boy, bad boy, what ya gonna do when she come for you. :-)

Thunder stalks the clouds. Lightning flees before her steps Like a naughty boy. (C) Copy written, September 19, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviews of "Haiku: When Mama Ain't Happy..."

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

I love the imagery and metaphor here...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Good use of metaphor, Karla.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Beautiful piece
haiku at its best

William ....Peace

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Seems yo me we are on the same page Karla!!

Stormy but good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Lovely Haiku. So creative you are, karla. I like the way you describe situations in very small lines of Haiku.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Excellent haiku.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

I like your haiku!
Very descriptive!
Becca

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Must be storm season in Texas...but then again isn't it always? Naughty boys are a given, all boys are naughty! And we love it! Keep Smilling, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Mommy's got her paddle on LOL

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

lol excellent.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

nothing worse to be around
when mama call the thunder down

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

a very striking experience ...

creative ku!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Fantastic, you are the queen of creative Ku Karla!;-)!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Wonderful poem and graphics , Karla
Love and Hugs
Peter

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

What a creative haiku!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Fantabulous, Karla!
Both the poem and the striking graphic.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

Nice one. The picture fits so well. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 19, 2004

uh oh...sounds like someone's in a serious bit of hurt! LOL cute 'ku, karla! thanks for sharing; enjoyed much~ love the picture, too; this fits the nature of the 'ku perfectly! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D

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