Haiku (5/7/5): Sea Breeze Thunderstorms (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 18, 2005

(((Karla)))

Spectacular imagery and wordplay; very clever and well done 'ku; you are really gettin' good at these! BRAVA; go on and take a bow, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 18, 2005

Excellent haiku Karla!

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 18, 2005

Wow. this is super. It somehow resembles a Somali cultural quiz in which elders exchange metaphors to explain what it exactly means. This is wonderful karla because in our quiz we ask one to explain what it meant by: pocorn in the sky ... and he would say: STARS
Take million thanks for this karla
your brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 18, 2005

And that is one hot oven!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 17, 2005

Damn, I marvel each and every time I read your Haiku, if you don't publish all of yours someday, you are crazy...! Ed

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2005

Love the images you have built within this write~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 17, 2005

Hell's Even Worse Heat To Come...

TRASK