Haiku (5/7/5): Determined (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 20, 2006

Very bright and chipper poem that has a strong message to the rest of us. Hope your Dad is doing better my thoughts are with you.

Felix

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

This is a perfect haiku in every way, Karla! My highest compliment ... wish I'd written that!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Rita Fagin

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Hello Karla, I'm simply rita, recommened to you by Cyn'tha read. I pleased to have been introduced to you through her. Thank you for your lovely comment with regard to my work. I look forward to reading from you and sending work to you. Take care, simply rita

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

beautiful, Karla...and good news~!

continued best wishes,
Gina

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

i like this

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Lovely Haiku, Karla.

Carmen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

aww wonderful ku Karla!!

Your family is in my prayers!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Those robins are truly wise little creatures - and very lovely, as is your 'ku, Karla. And our thoughts and prayers for your father continue.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Beautiful done. We are very relieved to hear that your Dad is doing better, we'll still keep you all in our prayers and close to our heart!
Lots of love and many hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

A delightful Ku, with a wonderful picture of a robin !
I have your Dad in my prayers Karla
Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Karla,

Wonderful write with the hope of things anew; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Fantastic haiku. Dad is in my prayers. Hope he will recover soon
Your brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

:) lOOOOOOve it! good luck to your dad, he's in my prayers :) hugs and best wishes to all of you!! Danielle

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

LOve it! Hope springs eternal!;-) Take care, new jobs take a lot out of you!Thanks for update!
Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

Singing for the warmth to come.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2006

The robins know the secret :-) Great Haiku.....get it to a publisher!