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Tres Linhas: Dying Thunderstorm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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VERY intense thunderstorms immediately to our west collapsed, creating a 10 degree temperature rise and nearly 70 mile winds overnight. Scattered reports of damage throughout Tarrant and Johnson counties, but none here, thank God. It was scary for a while, though...more severe weather possible this afternoon through Friday evening.


Poem Artwork

Dying from within,
the thunderstorm begins
to collapse, loses its spin.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Tres Linhas: Dying Thunderstorm"
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Wow Karla, an excellent write, and we are thinking of moving out of California maybe we should stay where we are at lol.
GOd Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
MOst outstanding Karla!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Very astute, Karla and filled with understanding and reverence in so few words and lines. Almost seems "humanised". An "internal" view of the storm not readily written about. Seems you know your subject well... and choose to represent it in the most interesting ways! Stay safe! :)) Love, Kate xx

Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Amazing write,
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
This is a scary yet pretty picture, and the words bring out that darkness. I hope all is well where you are and that you are safe and sound.Be well and God bless-Love, Michelle

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Awesome haiku with photo to match.You two be careful out there!
Susan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Well, if ya like powerful weather, Texas is the place to be...Ed

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Beautiful Karla
Nothing more beautiful to the ears
as the rolling thunder, one hears at a distance
As the storm passes us by.

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Dear Karla,

You've spun a wonderful storm
in the Tres Linhas form!

Thank You so much for participating in the challenge.

Love & Light,
Joseph


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Nice tres linhas about your favorite subject.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Karla
You have accomplished an excellent and compelling tres linhas write
Joseph will love this innovative one
Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Striking entry into the contest Karla, excuse the pun.

Felix

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
You've put new meaning into an otherwise, drab and boring subject; WEATHER!!! I recall that it all began when you had a horrible dry spell. But since then, you've made it rain with good poetry,... sharing the moisture of sweet words with us.

Your Haikus are the envy of most Japanese Poetes, I betcha' - Bill

Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Karla~

I had no idea; I was snorin' my happy rumpus off. I was TIRED! LOL

Glad we had no damage here; God is good, isn't He?? Wonderful write; hope we get through this severe weather season in one piece! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on May 3, 2006
Stay safe, dear one, and write always. {{{{{{hug}}}}}}}


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