VERY intense thunderstorms immediately to our west collapsed, creating a 10 degree temperature rise and nearly 70 mile winds overnight. Scattered reports of damage throughout Tarrant and Johnson counties, but none here, thank God. It was scary for a while, though...more severe weather possible this afternoon through Friday evening.
Dying from within, the thunderstorm begins to collapse, loses its spin.
Very astute, Karla and filled with understanding and reverence in so few words and lines. Almost seems "humanised". An "internal" view of the storm not readily written about. Seems you know your subject well... and choose to represent it in the most interesting ways! Stay safe! :)) Love, Kate xx
This is a scary yet pretty picture, and the words bring out that darkness. I hope all is well where you are and that you are safe and sound.Be well and God bless-Love, Michelle
You've put new meaning into an otherwise, drab and boring subject; WEATHER!!! I recall that it all began when you had a horrible dry spell. But since then, you've made it rain with good poetry,... sharing the moisture of sweet words with us.
Your Haikus are the envy of most Japanese Poetes, I betcha' - Bill
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Michelle!
love Tinka
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
Susan
Nothing more beautiful to the ears
as the rolling thunder, one hears at a distance
As the storm passes us by.
Love & Peace
William
You've spun a wonderful storm
in the Tres Linhas form!
Thank You so much for participating in the challenge.
Love & Light,
Joseph
You have accomplished an excellent and compelling tres linhas write
Joseph will love this innovative one
Peter
Felix
Your Haikus are the envy of most Japanese Poetes, I betcha' - Bill
I had no idea; I was snorin' my happy rumpus off. I was TIRED! LOL
Glad we had no damage here; God is good, isn't He?? Wonderful write; hope we get through this severe weather season in one piece! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :)