S t r e t c h i n g, y a w n i n g awake, the sun rose to the melodious tunes of birdsong; throwing back the covers of the night, it stepped out its bed in the east and into a brand new day.
And I watched its appearance; greeted the dawn with joy in my heart, glad to see my friend after the long darkness ... and joined the birds in welcoming the morning.
I LIKE THIS!! Great form which somehow reminds me greatly of those first few waking moments... kinda stuttery, as it were - goodly so!! :)) Certainly makes me feel like yawning, stretching... and walkin about bare-chested! :)) Gotta luv it. You do good when you experiment with form and voice, Karla. TY Kate xx
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
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Simply beautiful; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Take care,
Sherry
God BLess
Michelle!
Love and harmony.
Susan
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
You always awaken us with the sunshine and joy of your mellifluous heart
Peter
Felix
love and peace, Carole
This is a good one to get us all - Rising!
- Bill
Love Tinka