Pullin' a multi-hued shawl 'round her shoulders, a riot of vivid pinks, purples and oranges, she takes her leave. Colors flash in the gathering dusk; it's gonna be a very long evenin' - don't expect her before dawn.
While the sun is away from you it is here shining for me and you can have it back when I say it good bye. How can we be two people when we have one sun to share? Love the wissdom, beauty and the way this poem rhymes
You capture the brilliance of the sunset last night perfectly in this uplifting, inspiring pen! Very well described and imaged; very well done! BRAVA; keep up the great work, Karla!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
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Wonderful composition of "Sun Goin' Down".
Long healthy creative life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Eileen
FEe
God Bless
Michelle~
"Sun Goin' Down"
Karla, this is a magnificent write.
"Pullin' a multi-hued
shawl 'round her shoulders"
Simply genuine!
Thank you for sharing, wow!
Sincerely,
Gwendolyn
Love Tinka
Excellent.
Hugs,
CJ
so very well done!
good write
john+
Carole
You capture the brilliance of the sunset last night perfectly in this uplifting, inspiring pen! Very well described and imaged; very well done! BRAVA; keep up the great work, Karla!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
We had a similiar stunning sunset in the UK..
Gloriously descriptive
Love
Peter