Haiku: Uneasy (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Sheer brilliance in this one, Karla!

Love&hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 6, 2006

Gook haiku, Karla. Good picture of the season.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

Not a funnel web I hope...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

Absolutely brilliant...the imagery so vivid!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

BRILLIANT!! I can see and feel this - perfect poetry! TY K xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

Now this is Good!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

You described leaves skittering along the walk with excellance.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

you very good at writing haiku, Karla ... great image ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

a haiku with legs :) really great image, perfect form. Dawn

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

beautiful nature watch you had and a wonderful caretaker muse beautiful

Hugs,
Light & Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Beautiful and image rich Haiku, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Awesome Karla as always
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Hey Karla, this is good. The analogy is perfect! Well done!

LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

I can quickly see the effect and understand the analogy of this one, it is really true.

fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

There seems to be too many spiders on AD. Halloween? I'm not much afraid of spiders, I have one running around my computer. Now with rats....aww, forget it. Great ku written as a ku should be written. Victor

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

this is a perfect 'ku,in my opinion, Karla! I very much enjoyed it! (:

Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Superb anology, Karla; very clever and unique poem! Very well done; brava! More, more, more!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Great analogy here Karla... well done!

Myrna

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

I saw ita couple of days ago! and now it came back to life as this beautiful haiku!!!

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

This is funny karla. I can see the wind blowing all eight legs out from under this helpless little spider.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Karla

Very delicate and sensitive haiku

Love and Blessings

Peter