SunFlowers (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 10, 2007

'sun flowers'. Now that's neat. Is there coffee in the cup? Cheers

Reviewed on August 7, 2007

Beautiful write Karla
oustanding piece

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

Outstanding poetry!
Your pen is quilling in vibrance of a typical day yet, overflowing with all the images, magnified!
I'll say it again~ Outstanding!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

Great musing here, Karla. Like the smart transitions with the inclusion of the coffee-cup image: makes it very real. A "wake up and smell the coffee" write that takes our attention to the really important things in life. Neat, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

Excellent piece Karla, making the beautiful sunrise come alive...

love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

I thouroghly enjoyed this one and the play on words that are so affective in your descriptions.

Fee

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

So very true. i love mornings and sunrise. The earth seems o fresh and vibrant.....m

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

Coffee Girl, wish that all mornings take with them that kind of peaceful awakening so the day will worthwhile.
Georg

Reviewed by Jennave Coz

Reviewed on August 5, 2007

Very unique vision and wordplay...Beautifully done...Jen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Beautiful Karla!!

Sorry for the previous slip of tha finga!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Leo Durrant

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Nice word-play. I like the "pasteled petals of light." Paints a perfect picture.
Leo

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

This is beautiful Karla you painted us a beautiful picture with this one
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

ah so unique and lovely! You have gone to yet another level Karla! Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Your a shining sunflower here at the den karla..
Lurve ya!
Ron

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

I can see this too and all my senses open to greet this astounding morning. So much beauty in an inspiring poem.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

oh, i love that line.."not found in my coffee cup!"

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

I love morning too, Karla. Thank you for this short, sweet, and concise tribute to the sun, the morning, and the pretty flowers that are well worth getting up from bed.

Jill

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Beautifully done, Karla...but I would love to have that in my coffee cup anyway
Amor

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Karla I love this poem.
Short, sweet and peaceful.

Patricia

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Very well done my friend. Well orchestrated image....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Exquisitely layered metaphorical image suffused with empowering inspiration. Thank you for such a beautiful reading experience.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Absolutely beautiful Karla!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Beautiful poem, Karla; very well done! Love the pic! :)

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

The first time I saw a field of sunflowers I was shocked, they were head down and burned out. Then I realised they were for harvesting to make sunflower oil. Great poem. Victor

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

wonderful, Karla!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

the pulse of life

Wonderful, Karla, and it truly makes one feel - alive!

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on August 4, 2007

Beautiful description of sunrise.