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All In A Day's Work
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This morning's pillowy clouds inspired this one ...

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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... clouds wrap the sun in
pillows of darkness,
trying to smother
morning before it
has a chance to take
first breath.  The light is
too strong, however -
it pushes against
the shoulders of its
assailant, tosses
it across the room ...
all in a day's work.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/3)
 


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 Reviews of "All In A Day's Work"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Smothered sun on a morning going darker...
...and a goooooooood morning to you too!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Beautiful work, but your last line's cliche. I think you should chuck it. "I'm all for chucking things," she says with a chuckle. --Chuck-Chuck

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
...strong and bright words...cast in shades of gray...and redeemed in brilliance.
nice pen Karla...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
so very powerful in its beauty

Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Beautiful, how can anyone see that and not believe? It is a question I have been asking myself for a long time
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Outstanding my friend....the depths of your thoughts amaze me! Enjoyed this much! Well done...
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
You are at one with the elements, they saturate your thoughts . . . They perform . . . You write . . . Regarding, "But, a gigolo?" . . . Believe what you will my friend . . .

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Karla,
This is an amazing poem..just as your beautiful picture.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Yes beautiful Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Beautifully visual...

love, Carole~

Reviewed by Tanisha Herrin (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
What a pretty picture and your words capture the beauty of the moment. Great piece and thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
an a beautiful day it is
peace and love be with you

William

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Nice imagery, Karla. Just need some warmer temps now.
Love and {{{{hugs}}},
Leland

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Intensely visual, powerful, vivid, and moving work. Thanks, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
A portrait painted brilliant shades of red done in words of glory. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Shine on.....

Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Ain't nobody gonna argue with the sun: the Light will triumph, every time! LOL Very well penned; love the pic! Gorgeous! BRAVA, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
And what powerful work, indeed!


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