Ocean Liners (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

I love this!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 6, 2008

You make me want to go too. Wonderfully penned, your friend in CO, Bonnie

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Cool pic! I can relate getting drawn into the imagery of the clouds! It's fun to just lay there and see.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

I'll have to look into that link thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Reminds me of a lullaby from "Chitty-Chitty Bang Bang"-- "A gentle breeze from Hush-a-bye Mtn/ softly blows o'er Lullaby bay... And fills the sails of boats that are waiting--waiting to sail your troubles away..." Who knows what dreams they're laden with-- how many of your own dreams you've set stock in arriving on a certain far away ship-- are going over the horizon to be delivered to others instead. --Charlie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

great image Karla,,I am with you,, any closer I am jumping aboard.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

So, you have a little sailor inside your heart!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Great imagery!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

A very captivating piece, Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

When I'm on vacation, I love to lay back and look up at the clouds by the ocean...so relaxing. Enjoyed this, especially the last two lines!

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Imagine what beauty you would see on one trip onboard that gossamer sea.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

lovely imagery

Reviewed by Steve Joos

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

I can see the high, dark clouds and the feel the oncoming thunder and lightning with this one, Karla. A good piece.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Gotta love this one Karla
The pic you described to a "T"
they do look like ocean liner racing
Peace I love be with you

William
See You got That great Storm weather
hunting Stare in your Bio Pic, (my favorite).....lol

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

...my favorite form of travel Karla...
well done...
John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

You need a passport and ticket to get aboard...e

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Yep! It's coming soon...the powerhouse of nature and her march of spring. Yep! can't ypou feel it?
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

"signaling one another with flickers of light."
What a great analogy... I hadn't thought of clouds having blinkers before.
:~)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

you are on board ~ evol ~ TedSo

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Karla~

Sounds good--the vacation, not the storms. LOL Excellent pen; brava! Captures the image perfectly--I think I see the Carnival Ecstacy! LOL
Back on cruise mode, hunh?? *grins*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Oacean liners it is, Karla . . . You have a vivid immagination and that is cool . . . I used to lay flat of my back and stare into the Heavens somewhere where it was quiet . . . You can really get into yourself doing that . . . Nice . . .