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Love/Hate
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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My relationship with weather: love it, hate it ... sounds like an abusive marriage, doesn't it?? Feel battered and bruised by her temper.

My prayers and thoughts with those affected by the southern tornado oubreak.

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman


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There is a side that is
lovely, when she shows her
gentleness, when she speaks
with softness in her voice.

It's when she picks things up,
throwing them at my head,
that has me beginning
to question our union -

always feel like I'm on
edge, walking on eggshells,
trying not to become
the target of her wrath.

How can someone who's so
beautiful be so ... let
me shut my mouth, before
"she" wonders where I am ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/6)

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 Reviews of "Love/Hate"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Almost a, "to be or not to be", parallel I sense here. A "Stormy" romance Karla. You and mother nature. Well thouight out poem. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Nice work, very nice!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Weather's duality superbly penned. I especially love the last verse. Rebecca

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
...some were missed...and others now hit with loss...nature speaks her own mind.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
A very unique analogy in this piece, Karla. I've never experienced a tornado or any big storm in my life before, but you have captivated my feelings with your verses that made me a little scared in the thought that I might be a target of 'her' wrath. Great write, my good friend!

Love,
Sheri

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
yes, my heart goes out to those folks as well

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
I'll say, she can kick up a tornado like no other. Practice ducking, great penned, Love, Bonnie...been on jury duty for 2 days. Missed you.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Blimey. Over here we heard bout your weather, and that's rare... be safe beaut...

Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Alot of emotion in your write, the weather has been crazy as of late hasnt it, my prayer too is with all who have been touched by the fury of the storms
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Oh, I'm with you on this, Karla! You know, if we survive long enough we'll (our weather technicians) be able to predict with accuracy what the effect of the flapping of a butterfly's wings over Jakarta will have on Arkansas or Tennessee, etc. But 'til then, we'll have to take the good with joy and tremble in a ditch when the bad is upon us.

Love and {{{{hugs}}}}
Leland

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
The ever present duality of life!Superb analogy in this one Karla!
I've been praying and crying while watching the devastation. Feels like a Katrina moment...Take care

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Comes with the dinner .~. olloveev _ TedSo

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Karla, you said it so well but, "I" don't see much beauty in stormy weather.
I lived in Xenia, Ohio in 1976 when a tornado (twins--one top at first with two tails and then the separated) touched down 200' to the rear of our house. I saw it out our back door--my son and his dad were on their way out; I stopped them. Thirty-two people died, Xenia was devasted.
Years later, out of the corner of my eye, I saw another BIGGIE when we were on the interstate in Kentucky ... heading back to Ohio. I made my husband pull over to the side of the road -- if we'd been on the bridge ???
It is extremely rare to have tornados in Oregon--I LOVE living here :)!
You are always in my prayers. Be aware, be safe, and may God's hand protect you and others in harms' way.
Sandy

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
But if we didn't have weather to talk about, what would we say? Nice work, I had the instinct to duck and sometimes still do.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Thanks for your thoughts, Karla. As always, well penned!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Great poem, Karla. I love how well you have captured both sides of weather... the gentle and kind side, as well as the unpredictable and scary side. I especially love the last stanza though. hee, hee...
It made me laugh.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Indeed there is that fine line,,,upredictable. Excellent write Karla!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Like a Furie, unreasonable, impetuous, the storm will come to disturb our peace....

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Excellent analogy between the weather and relationships. Incredible photo as well, Karla!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
She kicked some ass last night and this morning . . . Sad . . . Families will never be the same . . . I'm so sorry for them . . .

Reviewed on February 6, 2008
No one writes of nature, her ups and downs quite like you Karla, well penned and enjoyed.

Reviewed on February 6, 2008
O, boy, Karla--the comparison of weather to an abusive relationship is powerful. It inspires your poetry, yet makes you fear. Excellent; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
It's when she picks things up,
throwing them at my head,
that has me beginning
to question our union -

She sounds a lot like my first wife!


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