The Hunger (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 29, 2008

Very visual offering!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

...field of vision...and fire...strike an appetite.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

Red skies from in the afternoon a beheaded sun, or by the fires bestowed upon the grass land by someone that will not stomp his cigarette.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 28, 2008

Excelllent imagery in this, and beautiful photo Karla

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

You paint a vivid picture with today's offering Karla...good one!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

Powerful descriptions in this piece, Karla! Love the last line especially. Great write. Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

That photo is amazing...hurts my eyes like looking at the real thing. Good poem to go with it. Well done, Karla.

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

It often does seem like the weather has a mind and a soul all it's own and no matter how we try to predict it, the time we least expect is when it usually chooses to attack

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

Great imagery in this one, Karla! I love, love, love the picture as well.

Hope that rain comes your way soon.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

Searing, Karla. Like the sharp images of the blades of grass and knashing teeth... my kinda pictures! :)) I FELT THE BRITISH EARTHQUAKE LAST NIGHT.... IT WOKE ME UP WITH ME BED SHAKING AND I'M ABOUT 150 MILES FROM THE EPICENTRE!!! WOAH!! :)) xx

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

Keep depicting them. Outstanding picture in words and light.

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

I agree with Eileen. Gnashing of teeth is a wonderful line and quite sensory, Karla. I love the poem and the picture. Please send your prayers down my way. I'm really struggling with a plate full, right now.

Thanks and Much Love,
Jill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

ooooooooh "gnashing of teeth",great line Karla!Excellent both
pic and poem...send me your email addy, I'll send you the midi...I lost all my addies when my puter crashed...I'm etw.surewest.net...don't forget to convert the a !;-)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

Karla~

It's too scary, too chilling to think about! I hope we never see those flames! Hope we get the relief that we need soon (without the svr)!! Very powerfully penned fear and uncertainty in this poem; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

Soon . . . Very soon . . . .